改错并说明原因1.He would demand an exorbitant price,for the goods he will sell,and through bargaining with the customer,a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因2.At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she sa

改错并说明原因1.He would demand an exorbitant price,for the goods he will sell,and through bargaining with the customer,a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因2.At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she sa
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1.He would demand an exorbitant price,for the goods he will sell,and through bargaining with the customer,a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因
2.At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who disliked change,the Minister of Transport,Mrs.Castle,speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders,expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled.

改错并说明原因1.He would demand an exorbitant price,for the goods he will sell,and through bargaining with the customer,a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因2.At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she sa
1.He would demand an exorbitant price,for the goods he will sell,and through bargaining with the customer,a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因
后半句中bargaining是现在分词结构,主语应该是he,而不是后面的market price.
2.At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who disliked change,the Minister of Transport,Mrs.Castle,speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders,expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled.
这个句子很长,可是语法上我实在找不出毛病,是不是dislike change应该改为dislike changes,不过实在有点牵强,楼主自己考虑一下吧.

1.for the goods he will sell, will改为would，前后时态不一致。
2.the rail strike had not been settled。 had改为has。

1.He would demand an exorbitant price, for the goods he will sell, and through bargaining with the customer, a market price would eventually be settled.
改错： He would demand an exorbitant price for...

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1.He would demand an exorbitant price, for the goods he will sell, and through bargaining with the customer, a market price would eventually be settled.
改错： He would demand an exorbitant price for the goods he would sell, and through bargaining with the customer, a market price would eventually be settled.
去掉逗号，再把will 改成would,因为是过去时。
2. At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who disliked change, the Minister of Transport, Mrs. Castle, speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders, expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled.
改错：At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who disliked changes, the Minister of Transport, Mrs. Castle, speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders, expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled.
把change改为changes，因为change是可数名词。

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He would demand an exorbitant price, for the goods he will sell, and through bargaining with the customer, a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因
will 应该改用 would, 以求前后一致
At the end ...

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He would demand an exorbitant price, for the goods he will sell, and through bargaining with the customer, a market price would eventually be settled.说明原因
will 应该改用 would, 以求前后一致
At the end of a rousing speech on government policies which she said were designed to stimulate the economy in spite of the opposition of those who disliked changes, the Minister of Transport, Mrs. Castle, speaking at a meeting of trade union leaders, expressed her bitter disappointment that the rail strike had not been settled. 可以 删去 of those

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太多了巴.

1.太乱了
2.disliked change==>disliked changing