英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个Dear Editor, In order to make my parents happy,I never went to Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. I like reading book or doing my homework at home while list

英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个Dear Editor, In order to make my parents happy,I never went to Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. I like reading book or doing my homework at home while list
英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个
Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places.
I like reading book or doing my homework
at home while listening music. But during every winter
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives
get here to play the cards.I am very tired
of the noise the game makes,and my parents
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me!

英语短文改错,请帮帮我把这篇改一下错,每行有一个Dear Editor, In order to make my parents happy,I never went to Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. I like reading book or doing my homework at home while list
Dear Editor,
In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> go
Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. crowding -> crowded
I like reading book or doing my homework or -> and
at home while listening music. But during every winter listening -. listening to the
holiday,my home just becomes a playroom.many relatives many -> Many
get here to play the cards.I am very tired get -> come
of the noise the game makes,and my parents and -> but
enjoy it.How I long for a quietly place to read quitly －＞quite
books or learn somthing that they cannot get at they －＞ I
school without being diaturbed !Please helps me! helps －＞ help

went 改为go
crowding crowded
book books
listening to
home house
去掉the
and but
quitely quite
they it
diaturbed disturbed，helps help

看好哦 谁答对了采纳谁的哦
1.went -go
2.crowding-crowded
3.or-and
4.listening to the
5.home-house
6.去掉the
7.and-but
8.quitely-quite
9.they-it
10.helps-help

我的答案应该是最准确的：
1. went → go
2. crowding → crowded
3. book → books
4. listening和music之间加入to
5. home → house (如果有一行正确，则此行无错，楼主确定每行都有错误吗？)
6. 去掉the
7. and → but
8. quietly →...

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我的答案应该是最准确的：
1. went → go
2. crowding → crowded
3. book → books
4. listening和music之间加入to
5. home → house (如果有一行正确，则此行无错，楼主确定每行都有错误吗？)
6. 去掉the
7. and → but
8. quietly → quiet
9. they → I
10. helps → help

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