检查一下下面的句子语法有没有错误Hello,everyone,At first,let’s read some new words.Today,I want to introduce a super star.He is 29 years old.He is very cool.He is good at playing the piano.He loves his mother very much.On the 15th of

检查一下下面的句子语法有没有错误Hello,everyone,At first,let’s read some new words.Today,I want to introduce a super star.He is 29 years old.He is very cool.He is good at playing the piano.He loves his mother very much.On the 15th of
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Hello,everyone,At first,let’s read some new words.
Today,I want to introduce a super star.
He is 29 years old.
He is very cool.
He is good at playing the piano.
He loves his mother very much.
On the 15th of October,he put out his 9th music album.
Do you know who is he?
Yes,he is jay chou!
Do you like him?Please hold your hands.
I very like him,too.
Because he loves music.
Because he is good at playing the piano.
Because he is good at playing basketball.
Because he is frendly to his fans.
Because he never gives up.
Because he never pay attention at what do others said.
Because he loves his mother.
Because he is always dumbness.
Jay’s story
Since 4 years old,Jay learn to play the piano.Because his mother and piano teacher are very strict,he studies the piano very well.When he was a child,he want to be a pianist.But now he is a popular singer.It’s so surprising!I’m sure Jay becomes popular is because of he can write music.So,ability is very important,we must study hard.
Jay loves his mother very much.Do you know Ye Huimei?She’s Jay’s mother.And it’s one of Jay’s music album’s name.Please listen to your mother,don’t let your mother worry about you.
Jay loves music,and he loves movies,too.He acted a lot of roles,in the movie secret he is a student.And it is Jay’s maiden work.Here is a theme song of the movie.(In English)
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检查一下下面的句子语法有没有错误Hello,everyone,At first,let’s read some new words.Today,I want to introduce a super star.He is 29 years old.He is very cool.He is good at playing the piano.He loves his mother very much.On the 15th of
1.I do like him either !2.He has never given up ;he has never cared what does other say.3.At the age of 4,jay started to learn piano.His mother and piano teacher were so strict that forced him had to study hard .5.He wanted to be a pianist.6.It's so amazing换suprising.7.jay becomes popular cause he can write songs fabulously.That

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