帮我看看这篇英语作文有木有语法错误,快.At the beginning of the movie,I thought the whole story is about the princess and the bear finally together,so the whole country have become good friends with the bear of course,finally met a wi

帮我看看这篇英语作文有木有语法错误,快.At the beginning of the movie,I thought the whole story is about the princess and the bear finally together,so the whole country have become good friends with the bear of course,finally met a wi
帮我看看这篇英语作文有木有语法错误,快.
At the beginning of the movie,I thought the whole story is about the princess and the bear finally together,so the whole country have become good friends with the bear of course,finally met a wise prince,but as the story further,began to see a deductive fate,moving film interpretation of affection.
"Brave" select stories focus on rebellious Princess and her strict mother live,will be the contradiction between the two amplification,and Merida's fate is always in her own hands,regardless of the impulse causing accidents or the ultimate change danger into safety,all to her to find the answer.
At the end of the movie,we see more not one of humility,more respect.Merida learned that his mother has taken,follow the princess mother footsteps to see beyond the world.
The film after watching a lot of feelings,in fact,each of us young had a growth experience,then wait until after the US adult son,also hope their children as their own growth is steady decent,and every child has the individuality and the pursuit of their own,bound or early let the children become too rigid,or will only make the child more and more choice of rebellion..
Everyone has the right to pursue dreams,but respect for our family is our duty.When a person is able to know how to respect their parents,listen to your children,and occasionally to pursue the life you want,that person will be very contented and happiness

帮我看看这篇英语作文有木有语法错误,快.At the beginning of the movie,I thought the whole story is about the princess and the bear finally together,so the whole country have become good friends with the bear of course,finally met a wi
? 居然看不懂是什么意思.是不是网络翻译过来的?错误太多了.都没把办法看出原意来了.

English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English must hard。But I am not study hard。And my English Is not very well ，Sometimes I think English is ...

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English is very important in the world。Because many countrys are useing English。I think study English must hard。But I am not study hard。And my English Is not very well ，Sometimes I think English is ery difficult。But Sometimes I think it is interesting too。I will study hard in the future。I will read English every day。I will listen English songs。And I will try to talk with my classmates in English。I thingk I will study English ery well。

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第一段：1.together前的动词呢？2.further前的动词呢？
第二段：完全不知所云。story focus改成直接focus on就完了。regardless 后面又来个or，不知道要表达什么。
第三段：什么叫more not？footsteps前要有所有格。
算了，你还是重写一个吧。
不要用这么多同位语和插入语，还有注意用词要适当。而且不要拿汉语的意思直...

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第一段：1.together前的动词呢？2.further前的动词呢？
第二段：完全不知所云。story focus改成直接focus on就完了。regardless 后面又来个or，不知道要表达什么。
第三段：什么叫more not？footsteps前要有所有格。
算了，你还是重写一个吧。
不要用这么多同位语和插入语，还有注意用词要适当。而且不要拿汉语的意思直接翻，你这篇就是纯粹的Chinese English！

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写得挺好的啊