我的一篇英语日记,初中水平我英语不太好,请大家帮我看一下有什么要改的地方谢谢了 Today,I felt a bit glum.Because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something.My father

我的一篇英语日记,初中水平我英语不太好,请大家帮我看一下有什么要改的地方谢谢了 Today,I felt a bit glum.Because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something.My father
我的一篇英语日记,初中水平
我英语不太好,请大家帮我看一下有什么要改的地方谢谢了
Today,I felt a bit glum.Because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something.My father said:"I really hope my daughter could into the key hight school,I'm confident in her.Then my mather said:"So am I".
At that time,how anxious I was.I was so afaid to fail the test,I didn't want to let my parents down,but I had little confidence for this test.I didn't know what to do.Maybe I could only pray myself.（也许我只能为自己祈祷）

我的一篇英语日记,初中水平我英语不太好,请大家帮我看一下有什么要改的地方谢谢了 Today,I felt a bit glum.Because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something.My father
第一个单词,GLUM,这个单词不知道是不是你们课本上的单词,这个单词比较大,比较正式,不常用,不建议使用,现在帮你整理一下这篇文章：
I was feeling depressed today at a conversation between my father and my mother this afternoon. He said to her 'I really hope that our daughter could enter the model high school (示范高中,就是你所说的重点高中) and I believe that she will', ' So do I', my mother replied.
Since then,I felt that I was much too anxious,and I was worried that I might fail in the Highschool Entrance Examination (中考-高中入学考试). I don't want to disappoint my parents,but I have no confidence in myself for the test. I know nothing about what to do but to pray for myself only.
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第一行应该是woke up，wake过去式是woke，过去分词woken
其他的不知
本人初二，很多没学
另外，hight school什么意思？

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Today,I felt a bit glum,because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something."I really hope my daughter could into the key hight school,I'm...

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注意语句顺序，
Today,I felt a bit glum,because in the afternoon,when I waked up,I heard my father and my mother was talking about something."I really hope my daughter could into the key hight school,I'm confident in her."My father said.(Then my mather said:"So am I". )什么意思
At that time,how anxious I was.I was so afaid to fail the test,I didn't（作文不要简写用did not） want to let my parents down,but I had little confidence for this test.I didn't know what to do.Maybe I could only pray myself.

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I felt a little bit gloomy today. It began in the afternoon when I heard my parents' conversation. My father said that he really wanted me to be admitted into one of the best high schools in our city ...

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I felt a little bit gloomy today. It began in the afternoon when I heard my parents' conversation. My father said that he really wanted me to be admitted into one of the best high schools in our city and he had faith in me. Then my mother said she couldn't agree more.
At that time, I felt anxious and worried. I am terribly afraid of failing my senior high school entrance examination. I know I should not disappoint my parents but that exam was too difficult to me. I have little faith in myself. What can I do? God help me!

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