3QRT I think if she holds on to her dream ,the dream that becoming a singer will come ture.自我感觉还好 那改成什么呢....

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3QRTIthinkifsheholdsontoherdream,thedreamthatbecomingasingerwillcometure.自我感觉还好那改成什么呢....3QRTIthinki

3QRT I think if she holds on to her dream ,the dream that becoming a singer will come ture.自我感觉还好 那改成什么呢....
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那改成什么呢....

3QRT I think if she holds on to her dream ,the dream that becoming a singer will come ture.自我感觉还好 那改成什么呢....
that becoming不对,要么不要that,要么which is to become

本身的确很好,只不过这个同位语从句用错了,改成the dream to become a singer…… 就行了,或者:the dream that she will become a singer ....

有点繁琐,精简一下,I think if she stick to her dream,she will realize it and become a real singer.

改成:the dream that is becoming(to become) a singer will come true.
that引导的定语从句用的时候一定要记住,定语从句也是一个完整的句子,你用that代替dream做从句中的主语,那谓语或系动词呢,只用becoming不是一个完整的句子了,对吧。

不正确,that是连接词,连接从句,常见定语从句和同位语从句。因此不需要that,直接用I think if she holds on to her dream ,the dream of becoming a singer will come ture.另外,楼上所说的也不对,the dream 和 become a singer 不是定语从句,而是同位语的关系,所以which is to ...

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不正确,that是连接词,连接从句,常见定语从句和同位语从句。因此不需要that,直接用I think if she holds on to her dream ,the dream of becoming a singer will come ture.另外,楼上所说的也不对,the dream 和 become a singer 不是定语从句,而是同位语的关系,所以which is to become 是不正确的。因为不是the dream become a singer。

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我觉得可以改成:in my opinion, if she holds on to her dream of becoming of a singer, the dream will come true.