给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方My Best HolidayIn the last year,I went to a place that I always hope I can go there.My parents、our friends and I went there by ship .Ittook us about 2

给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方My Best HolidayIn the last year,I went to a place that I always hope I can go there.My parents、our friends and I went there by ship .Ittook us about 2
给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方
My Best Holiday
In the last year,I went to a place that I always hope I can go there.My parents、our friends and I went there by ship .Ittook us about 2 hours to get there.
Now,let's reveal the secret.This place is Taiwan.
I heard there's lots of delicious food .So the first day,we went to the snack street.We visuted Yonghe City and tasted the Yonghe soya-bean milk.the feeling was very cool.then we ate the carb custards.The taste made us wanto eat more and more……
The main of this trip was coming.We went to the One Piece theme park.
First,we had fun on the Sunny ship There're many Nami's orange trees.Then,many cartoon characters was coming.Such as Shanks、Luffy、Chopper……I couldn'd believe my eyes.They made me get very excited.I couldn't stop taking photo with them.I thought it will be the best time of this day.
Next,we did some shopping about One Piece toys.I love them very.
MY trip seems to go faster,but ai least,I had a fantastic time there.

给一篇英语作文,求大神找找有没有语法、单词用法上的错误和改善的地方My Best HolidayIn the last year,I went to a place that I always hope I can go there.My parents、our friends and I went there by ship .Ittook us about 2
许多语法,用词错误.以修改
My Best Holiday
Last year,I went to a place that I always hoped for a chance to go there.My parents,our friends and I went there by ship.It took us about 2 hours to get there.So let's reveal the secret,this place was Taiwan.
I heard there was lots of delicious food.So the first day,we went to the snack street.We visited Yonghe City and tasted the Yonghe soya-bean milk,it tased very diffferent.Then we ate the carb custards,which was so good we wanted to eat more and more……
Next,the highlight of this trip was coming,which is One Piece theme park.
First,we had fun on the Sunny ship There're many Nami's orange trees.Then,many cartoon characters was coming.Such as Shanks、Luffy、Chopper……I couldn'd believe my eyes.They made me get very excited.I couldn't stop taking photo with them.I thought it will be the best time of this day.We also did some shopping about One Piece toys.I love them very.
My trip seems like only a few hours,bu most importantly I had a fantastic time there.