请大家替我修改下,看看是否存在语法错误.In the past three years,I have learnt how to play basketball.Once,when I saw some students playing basketball on the playground,I felt very surprised.Ithought that it would be fun if I joined th

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请大家替我修改下,看看是否存在语法错误.Inthepastthreeyears,Ihavelearnthowtoplaybasketball.Once,whenIsawsomestudentsplay

请大家替我修改下,看看是否存在语法错误.In the past three years,I have learnt how to play basketball.Once,when I saw some students playing basketball on the playground,I felt very surprised.Ithought that it would be fun if I joined th
请大家替我修改下,看看是否存在语法错误.
In the past three years,I have learnt how to play basketball.Once,when I saw some students playing basketball on the playground,I felt very surprised.Ithought that it would be fun if I joined them,so I asked them for help.With the help of them,I made great progress in basketball.From then on,I was more and more interested in playing it.I always feel excited and active after playing asketball now and that makes me love my life.

请大家替我修改下,看看是否存在语法错误.In the past three years,I have learnt how to play basketball.Once,when I saw some students playing basketball on the playground,I felt very surprised.Ithought that it would be fun if I joined th
1..I thought that it would be fun if I joined them.So I asked them for help.
这个连词if已经连接了两个句子,so独立开一个句子比较好.
2.I made great progress in basketball变成I made great progress in playing basketball 更能强调“在打篮球”方面取得了进步
3.I always feel excited and active
个人觉得active偏向于“积极,主动”,这里用energetic精力充沛的,充满活力的 会比较好.

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In the last three years,I learned how to play basketball.Once I saw some students playing basketball on the playground,I felt very surprised. it would be fun if I joined them,so I asked them for help.With their help,I made great progress in basketball.From then on,I was more and more interested in playing it.I always feel excited and active after playing asketball now and it makes me love my life

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