修改essay,..If collages were garden that students would be flowers,professors would be hard gardener .However,Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important.About tenure,a lots of teachers want get it.Because once tenured,profes

修改essay,..If collages were garden that students would be flowers,professors would be hard gardener .However,Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important.About tenure,a lots of teachers want get it.Because once tenured,profes
修改essay,..
If collages were garden that students would be flowers,professors would be hard gardener .However,Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important.
About tenure,a lots of teachers want get it.Because once tenured,professors hold their jobs without review and with little danger of being fired or replaced .But I think of it only be advantage to professors ,do nothing to good thinking about students .On other hand ,tenure will attract highly qualified candidates to the profession,but maybe these candidates can’t make funny at classroom and will not care about students.Therefore,highly education of professors can’t evidence to everything.The attention must be paid to normal performances of the professors,also believe in personal ability and experience.
In many ways,the impact on society of Unemployment Rate,and without more opportunity for teachers to practice.The teaching practice will afford them opportunity of gaining some necessary experience,only in this way can teacher become professor.
Another good reason that reward by professor,who have significant research and teaching experience.They should get great awards.Indeed some people believe that their professors received tenure sign highly qualified,well experienced teaching.
Relatively speaking,I consider this is impractical and unfair that tenure only leads to poor teaching and holds his or her job without any fear of losing job.Professor should be reward for dedicated service and care as much about students.

修改essay,..If collages were garden that students would be flowers,professors would be hard gardener .However,Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important.About tenure,a lots of teachers want get it.Because once tenured,profes
If collages were garden then students would be flowers,professors would be hard gardener .However,havin great professor to teach student is very important.
About tenure,a lots of teachers want get it.Because once tenured,professors hold their jobs without review and with little danger of being fired or replaced .But I think of it only be advantage to professors ,do nothing to good thinking about students .On other hand ,tenure will attract highly qualified candidates to the profession,but maybe these candidates can’t make funny at classroom and will not care about students.Therefore,highly education of professors can’t evidence to everything.The attention must be paid to normal performances of the professors,also believe in personal ability and experience.
In many ways,the impact on society of Unemployment Rate,and without more opportunity for teachers to practice.The teaching practice will afford them opportunity of gaining some necessary experience,only in this way can teacher become professor.
Another good reason that reward by professor,who have significant research and teaching experience.They should get great awards.Indeed some people believe that their professors received tenure sign highly qualified,well experienced teaching.
Relatively speaking,I consider this is impractical and unfair that tenure only leads to poor teaching and holds his or her job without any fear of losing job.Professor should be reward for dedicated service and care as much about students.

gardeners第二行要用复数吧
Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important. 不懂你要表达什么意思？
a lots of改为lots of或a lot of第四行
On other hand加个the在on后面第八行
at classroom 我们一般不这样说吧，要用in ...

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gardeners第二行要用复数吧
Most of be a great professor to teaching student is very important. 不懂你要表达什么意思？
a lots of改为lots of或a lot of第四行
On other hand加个the在on后面第八行
at classroom 我们一般不这样说吧，要用in the classroom吧
teacher become professor. 单数名词前要有冠词的，要不就用复数
reward by，去掉by
as much about students. 这句你想表达什么啊，反正用地不对劲
俺的能力有限，只能做到现在了……

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...........太长了点，而且你自己的essay还是你自己最了解你自己，自己改吧。。。
提示：college 写错了，第一个that 也应该改称then...