小弟我用英文写《基督山伯爵》的读后感.语法有很多错..请哥哥姐姐帮我改正一下..《The Count of Monte Cristo》 This month I saw a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is 《The Count of Monte Cristo》.I can say the p

小弟我用英文写《基督山伯爵》的读后感.语法有很多错..请哥哥姐姐帮我改正一下..《The Count of Monte Cristo》 This month I saw a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is 《The Count of Monte Cristo》.I can say the p
小弟我用英文写《基督山伯爵》的读后感.语法有很多错..请哥哥姐姐帮我改正一下..
《The Count of Monte Cristo》
This month I saw a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is 《The Count of Monte Cristo》.
I can say the plot of the story is so very intriguing.It attract me to read.
The hero of this story is Edmond Dantes.He is very clever and brave.
One day,Edmond Dantes to marry his wife.But he set up by two men.Then he behind bars.It’s like dreaming for him.In the jail,he met a old man.He stay in the jail about 14 years.In this time,the old man teach he many things and took he how can he find the treasure.
After 14 years they planed to run away the jail.But suddenly,the old man had a hereditary disease.He was dead.And Edmond Dantes run away the jail.And find out the treasure.
At last he pay back his benefactor and punish the villain.
At the end of the story.It says two words contain hunmen’s wisdom:wait and wish.I think It’s right.If we have patient to wait,the wish will show up.
《The Count of Monte Cristo》 teach me many thing and these will be beneficial for my lifetime.
请各位哥哥姐姐改正的时候把全文整体改...不然小弟看了会头晕...
我觉得这篇文章的读后感不够多...哥哥姐姐们觉得有需要的帮小弟加一点句子上去...
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小弟我用英文写《基督山伯爵》的读后感.语法有很多错..请哥哥姐姐帮我改正一下..《The Count of Monte Cristo》 This month I saw a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is 《The Count of Monte Cristo》.I can say the p
1、正文第三行so和very不能共存,都是修饰形容词；
2、It attract me to read这句话用法上有错误,你要表达的是“它很吸引我”对吧,但是这样就出现了重复,应该用attract to sb吸引某人,或者在sb后面再加上to read；
3、The hero of this story故事中的英雄,of改成in；
4、One day这一段的时态你再好好看看,应该都用一般过去时；
5、Edmond Dantes to marry his wife和他的妻子结婚,应该是marry with sb；
6、But he set up by two men应该是被动语态was set up；
7、It’s like dreaming for him改为It was like a dream for him；
8、He stay in the jail about 14 years.过去完成时比较好一些,为He had stayed in the jail for 14 years.
9、你看看你的时态,都是混合用,一会过去一会现在的,很乱；
10、It says two words contain hunmen’s wisdom:wait and wish后面用动名词waiting and wishing；
11、teach me many thing要用复数things；

This month I read a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is The Count of Monte Cristo.
I can say the plot of the story is very intriguing.It attracts me much.
The hero of this story is Edmo...

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This month I read a book by Alexandre Dumas Pere.This book is The Count of Monte Cristo.
I can say the plot of the story is very intriguing.It attracts me much.
The hero of this story is Edmond Dantes.He is very clever and brave.
One day, Edmond Dantes was to marry his wife.But he was set up by two men.Then he was thrown behind bars.It was like a nightmare for him.In the jail,he met an old man.He stayed in the jail for about 14 years. During this time,the old man taught him many things and told him how to find the treasure.
After 14 years, they planned to run away from the jail.But the old man had a hereditary disease.He was dead. Edmond Dantes ran away from the jail and found the treasure.
At last he paid back his benefactor and punished the villain.
At the end of the story,it says two words contain hunman’s wisdom:wait and wish.I think It’s right.If we have patience to wait,the wish will show up.
The Count of Monte Cristo teaches me many things and these will be beneficial for my lifetime.

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宝贝 我看下面翻译的都不错啊，但是哦 记得要注意下时态啊，下面和你的文章用了很多现在时， 但你明白啊你读的这本书 已经看完了 你现在写观后感 所以要用适当的用过去式或过去完成时来描写句子 对了 如果你们现在还没学的话 拿就不强求了。
是实话我看了下你写的文章 真的很不错啊，其实你注意下时态和用词只要把自己想表达的话用简单的句子表达清楚和不要跑题 就是个好文章了 太多的语法不用强调 这个...

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宝贝 我看下面翻译的都不错啊，但是哦 记得要注意下时态啊，下面和你的文章用了很多现在时， 但你明白啊你读的这本书 已经看完了 你现在写观后感 所以要用适当的用过去式或过去完成时来描写句子 对了 如果你们现在还没学的话 拿就不强求了。
是实话我看了下你写的文章 真的很不错啊，其实你注意下时态和用词只要把自己想表达的话用简单的句子表达清楚和不要跑题 就是个好文章了 太多的语法不用强调 这个就是的高分的要诀。 如果你这个文章有人给批改的话 你就怎么交吧 然后记得认真的去问老师 为什么要怎么改，和你错在哪里 这样你能既不更快的。
最后祝你成功 还有啊 你是最棒的。 加油

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