大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~Hollow everyone,i am a junior student,my english is so poor,CET-4 now not Pass.I feel anxiety and fear,I have worked hard and fought,but failed again and again,I fear and conflict with the English language.Neve

大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~Hollow everyone,i am a junior student,my english is so poor,CET-4 now not Pass.I feel anxiety and fear,I have worked hard and fought,but failed again and again,I fear and conflict with the English language.Neve
大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~
Hollow everyone,i am a junior student,my english is so poor,CET-4 now not Pass.I feel anxiety and fear,I have worked hard and fought,but failed again and again,I fear and conflict with the English language.Nevertheless,I had to learn it,because the English for the future full of an unfamiliar environment is essential,it help to enhance my competitiveness,the most important thing is that the CET-4 if you do not pass you cannot graduation.So I had to learn English.Starting today I will be in the bar to write an English article,I hope you will be able to supervise me and help me to modify.If possible,we can be friends.For me,learning English is a troublesome thing.However,I already made a determination and identify the direction,I look forward to you and common progress.Now,the hour is late.I wish you all good night.

大家帮我改改这篇英语作文吧~Hollow everyone,i am a junior student,my english is so poor,CET-4 now not Pass.I feel anxiety and fear,I have worked hard and fought,but failed again and again,I fear and conflict with the English language.Neve
【hello】 everyone,i am a 【college】 student,my english is 【not very good】,CET-4 now 【has not been passed】.I feel anxiety and fear,I have worked hard and fought,but failed again and again,【 I am very worried about my english】.【i have no choice but to learn it】 because the English 【is very important for our future】,【it can help us to communicate with others in different countries】,the most important thing is that 【if you don't pass the CET-4,you can't graduate from university】.So I had to learn English.Starting today I will be in the bar to write an English article,I hope you will be able to supervise me and help me to modify.【Maybe】 we can be friends.For me,learning English is a 【difficult】thing.However,I already made a determination and identify the direction,I look forward【you】 to 【coming here】 and 【making】common progress.Now,the hour is late.I wish you all good night.
帮你改好了,你看看吧,可能改的不是很好,我都标注出来了.另外,我把你文中的中学生改成了大学生,因为中学不要求过四级的,大学才这样要求的.加油吧,

hello, everyone , i am a student in junior school. my English is not good. I did not take the English exam as for CET-4. i feel not good for that, i always study English hard everyday, but i mad a lot...

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hello, everyone , i am a student in junior school. my English is not good. I did not take the English exam as for CET-4. i feel not good for that, i always study English hard everyday, but i mad a lot of mistakes. i thought that English is good for me. Nevertheless, I had to learn it, because the English language which is very useful in the future when you do something or to anounce anything for that. it can help to enhance my competitiveness it is the most important thing that i should pass the English exam. because i will need it when I graduate in my school. so from this time, i will be in the bar to write an English article everyday. I hope you can be able to supervise me and help me to do it. if you do it, we can be friends. As for me, it's trouble things as for learning English. i have already made a determination and to identify the direction, I look forward to hearing you and we can make a prgress together now. the time is so late, but i never give up. i can do it, i will do it.....I must be do it. Thank you for your listening!

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