我写的英文有语病吗!After discussion and analysis we decided to cancel two workshops which we have not yet completed,one is about saving electricity power cost by me,the other one is about filling degree by Wang Li; moreover we are planning t
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我写的英文有语病吗!After discussion and analysis we decided to cancel two workshops which we have not yet completed,one is about saving electricity power cost by me,the other one is about filling degree by Wang Li; moreover we are planning t
我写的英文有语病吗!
After discussion and analysis we decided to cancel two workshops which we have not yet completed,one is about saving electricity power cost by me,the other one is about filling degree by Wang Li; moreover we are planning to open three new topics,attachment for the charters,pls check it!If any problem feel free to let me know!
我写的英文有语病吗!After discussion and analysis we decided to cancel two workshops which we have not yet completed,one is about saving electricity power cost by me,the other one is about filling degree by Wang Li; moreover we are planning t
这是个 email 挺好.知道你要说什么.
建议:
“Moreover...”另起一段.
“Attachment...”另起一段.
最后一句改成:If you have any problem,feel free." 或 “Any questions?Pls let me know."
看第一眼的感觉就是为什么不舍得用句号!
真个界面显得有点拥挤,至于内容不一一指出。