有谁帮我看看有无语法错误Yesterday,my parent and me were invited to visit a garden who my grandfather planted.I don't understand what the garden look like. I would be so exciting. I only know that the vegetable was very delicious for gran
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有谁帮我看看有无语法错误Yesterday,my parent and me were invited to visit a garden who my grandfather planted.I don't understand what the garden look like. I would be so exciting. I only know that the vegetable was very delicious for gran
有谁帮我看看有无语法错误
Yesterday,my parent and me were invited to visit a garden who my grandfather planted.I don't understand what the garden look like. I would be so exciting. I only know that the vegetable was very delicious for grandfather planted.In the last year,he has palnted in the garden. My grandfather made a good dinner to celebrate us come to .He picked a big red tomato for me. How delicious it was!He taught me a lot about plant.He said we should protect plant because they were useful to us.I agreed with my grandfather. I love the plants in our garden.
有谁帮我看看有无语法错误Yesterday,my parent and me were invited to visit a garden who my grandfather planted.I don't understand what the garden look like. I would be so exciting. I only know that the vegetable was very delicious for gran
me 改成 I
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exciting 改成 excited
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has palnted 中的has去掉 planted 后 加 it
celebrate us come to 改成 welcome us
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My family was invited to visted the garden planted by my grandfather yesterday. I was so excited when I got there. I could hardly belive how wonderful the garden is. I had tasted the delicious vegetab...
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My family was invited to visted the garden planted by my grandfather yesterday. I was so excited when I got there. I could hardly belive how wonderful the garden is. I had tasted the delicious vegetables planted by my grandfather. I ate the fresh tomato picked by grandpa. He told me so much for gardening. At last, he insisted that we should protect plants which played an important role in our life. I made an agreement with him.
I love the plants in our garden.
写作文切忌时态前后不一致,你想陈述的是过去的事,用一般过去式就可以了。
上面是我根据你的意思进行的修改哈。
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