各位朋友帮我改改英语自我介绍~My name is ***.My English name is Walt.I am thirteen.I am avery clever boy.I have mang hobbies.My hobby is swimming,tennis and play computer.I am good at Chinese.I want to speak English very well.各位帮

各位朋友帮我改改英语自我介绍~My name is ***.My English name is Walt.I am thirteen.I am avery clever boy.I have mang hobbies.My hobby is swimming,tennis and play computer.I am good at Chinese.I want to speak English very well.各位帮 帮我改改英语选择题 我是***,有三口人,我和爸爸和妈妈,请各位朋友帮我找一个英语自我介绍,带汉义, 英语自我介绍帮我看看啊有错英语自我介绍、请英语好的帮我看看啊有错、帮涐改改、谢谢hello,Everyone.My name is XX.NOW I am 16 years old .I was born in XX.There are 3 people in my family ,my parent and I .we love eac 英语翻译帮我改改! 麻烦帮我改改! 哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Cla 英语自我介绍,帮我看看何不合适,还有哪些语法错误,连贯性咋滴,顺便帮我改改哦,先拜个谢咯Good morning ,boys and girls,I am glad to stand here to introduce myself.Firstly,my name is xiao jiahui ,i am a freshman in the 对吗,不对帮我改改 快帮我写写英语的自我介绍! 帮我写一段英语自我介绍 谁帮我写份自我介绍..英文的莪5.10早上9点要去时代面试的说...谁帮莪写份英文的自我介绍撒?或者帮莪改改:早上好,ever theatre.My name is ×××.今年12岁了.I'm form Jinshan School.I can draw and I can speak so a girl in the red is my classmate.哪有错,帮我改改. 谁能帮我改改英语作文?.. 请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下帮我把这段翻译一下并加进去：在上六年级的时候,我的父亲为了提高我的英语口语水平,让我 英语自我介绍 my family 你能帮我改改吗? 那你能帮我改改吗