请网友帮忙修改和加工一篇英语习作.Why should we do exercise?Now,There are more and kinds of disease in our life,They are bad for our health,we should do more exercise so as to keep healthy.Firstly,doing more exercise can keep us fit.Se

请网友帮忙修改和加工一篇英语习作.Why should we do exercise?Now,There are more and kinds of disease in our life,They are bad for our health,we should do more exercise so as to keep healthy.Firstly,doing more exercise can keep us fit.Se
请网友帮忙修改和加工一篇英语习作.
Why should we do exercise?
Now,There are more and kinds of disease in our life,They are bad for our health,we should do more exercise so as to keep healthy.
Firstly,doing more exercise can keep us fit.Secondly,it can make us stronger stronger,it makes us teenagers' life beeter.Thirdly,We can easily fight illness and disease with exercise's help.In fact,exercise is the best way to beat illness.Besides,We can also do exercise when we are tired and sad.
Now,we know exercise is very important.Let's remembered,some exercise a daykeeps the doctor away!

请网友帮忙修改和加工一篇英语习作.Why should we do exercise?Now,There are more and kinds of disease in our life,They are bad for our health,we should do more exercise so as to keep healthy.Firstly,doing more exercise can keep us fit.Se
Why Should We Do Exercise?
Now,There are many kinds of disease in our life,They are bad for our health,we should do more exercise so as to keep healthy.
Firstly,doing more exercise can keep fit.Secondly,it can make us stronger and stronger,it makes our teenagers' life better.Thirdly,We can easily defeat illness and disease.In fact,doing exercise is the best way to beat illness.Besides,We can also do exercise when we are tired and sad.
Now,we know exercise is very important.Let's remembere,some exercise a day keeps doctors away!
修改了点语法错,和不通顺,不太多.写的不错.

why should we do exercises?
nowadays, there are more and more disease in our life.they are bad for our health. so it is necessary for us to do exercise to keep healthy.firstly, doing exercise c...

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why should we do exercises?
nowadays, there are more and more disease in our life.they are bad for our health. so it is necessary for us to do exercise to keep healthy.firstly, doing exercise can keep us fit and make us stay away from fatness.secondly,if we do exercises everyday,our body will become strong enough to fight against disease.besides.we can also release our tired and sadness by doing exercise.
from the above,you can see the impotance of exercising. and please remember that, exercise a day ,keep a doctor away .
修改了一点，我没有大写哈。 你作文写的也挺好的。呵呵。

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根据我个人的理解，做了一些改动。
Why should we do exercises?
Now there are more and more kinds of disease in our life,which are bad for our health. We should do more exercises so ...

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根据我个人的理解，做了一些改动。
Why should we do exercises?
Now there are more and more kinds of disease in our life,which are bad for our health. We should do more exercises so as to keep healthy.
First,doing more exercises can keep us fit.Second,it can make us stronger and stronger,especially teenagers' life beeter.Third,We can easily fight with illness and disease with its help. In fact,exercising is the best way to beat illness.Besides these, We can also do exercises when we are tired and sad.
Hence we know doing exercises is very important as it is said that some exercise a day keeps the doctor away!

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