请英语高手帮我美化这篇英语文章.Some kind of love,does not need to wait.I don’t know that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love,the life track playing tricks on arranges us to meet the other,perhaps is the re

请英语高手帮我美化这篇英语文章.Some kind of love,does not need to wait.I don’t know that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love,the life track playing tricks on arranges us to meet the other,perhaps is the re
请英语高手帮我美化这篇英语文章.
Some kind of love,does not need to wait.I don’t know
that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love,the life track playing tricks on arranges us to meet the other,perhaps is the reason which we is destined.
The amativeness should not the love shackles,actually turned a heavy stone on our body,first only I carry it ,now actually takes lifting which we goes all out.Is tired,may rest,happiness which actually is unable to remove the heavy cloth wrapper,in the package is installing is not oneself clings to,but is the life irons on the heart the mark.The love is not the person is living complete,the person actually may live for the love,even if live is not certainly relaxed,understands the heart which loves actually to be allowed to be free.The love,is lonely the promise which promises for us,to choose by does not have us.
The fear light,actually longs for warm; Expects the love,actually cannot approach.In darkness pulls two ice-cold hands mutually to warm up,that pitiful temperature still attentive,in the heart silently tells oneself,this is in the life sorrow,does not call the love.Traces black is coming out,but also must along not have the bright the road to go back,I do not would rather dropping,duplicates that unnecessary speech:"Do you afraid of that you back by yourself?" " I am afraid could l come back!"
Missing at nonchalant time multiplies the spread,are more,we only are duplicating the simple regards."Where are you at?" "Outside." "What is busy?" "Is thinking you!" "Has the matter?" "Is all right." The heart,changes warmly in the short regards sound...
Finally one day,you confuse ask me:"Actually do we calculate what,sweetheart?Too bored!Spouse?Too funny!" No doubt is heavy,or said in the heart speech:"We are any are certainly unimportant,I only knew I love you!" You are smiling or are crying?I love dearly you to smile chillily beautifully,is gratified your happy tear.Recent you are I farthest love,you said likes being allowed in the heart the eternal,but do not have to wait for.Does not dare the wild hope often to accompany together,because of this nearly in very close horizon; Does not need mutually to pledge any,we only can be the convict which loves.
四楼朋友怎么不给我翻完，
还有不到5个小时就要用了。

请英语高手帮我美化这篇英语文章.Some kind of love,does not need to wait.I don’t know that between a dissolute man and a frivolous woman may have the love,the life track playing tricks on arranges us to meet the other,perhaps is the re
某种爱,不需要等候.我不知道
那在一个放荡的男人和一个轻佻的女人之间可能有爱,开生活轨道的玩笑安排我们遇见另一个, 也许是理由「我们被注定」.恋爱不应该爱枷,实际上在我们的身体上转了一块重的石头, 第一不过我携带它 , 现在实际上拿我们在外变所有的升高. 很疲累, 可能休息, 实际上不能够除去重的布料包裹器的快乐, 在包裹中正在安装是不自己黏附于 , 但是在心上是生活铁标志. 爱不是人住完全的, 人实际上可能为爱住, 即使活的不无疑被放松,了解实际上爱的心被允许是自由的. 爱,是孤单的为我们允诺的诺言, 选择被没有我们.恐惧光, 实际上渴望温暖的; 期待爱, 实际上不能够接近.在黑暗方面互相地拉二只极冷的手作准备动作 , 那慈悲的温度仍然注意, 在心默默地告诉自己, 这在生活悲伤方面, 不呼叫爱.痕迹黑色正在出来,但是也必须向前不有那明亮的道路回去, 我不宁愿输液,副本哪一不必要的演讲: "那做你害怕你向后地独自 ?" " 我害怕, l 可以回来吗!"
在不关心的时间失去乘传布,是更多,我们只正在复制简单的关心. "你在哪里在 ?" "外面 ." " 什么很忙碌?" " 正在想你!" " 有物质?" " 是没关系. " 心,亲切地在短关心声音中改变...最后一天, 你困惑问我: "实际上我们计算吗什么, 甜心? 太无趣的! 配偶? 太好笑的!" 无疑地很重, 或在心演讲说: "我们是任何的无疑不重要 , 我只知道我爱你 !" 你正在微笑或者正在哭泣? 我深深地爱你寒冷地美好地微笑, 被使满足你的快乐泪滴. 最近的你最远是我爱, 你说被允许心永恒者, 但是不一定要等候的同类. 不敢荒野时常希望一起陪伴, 因为这几乎在非常接近的地平线方面;不互相地需要保证任何,我们才能是爱的囚犯.

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一些爱, 不需要等待?I 不知道 在一个放浪人和一名轻佻妇女之间愿有爱, 生活轨道演奏把戏安排我们遇见其他, 或许是我们是注定的原因。 amativeness 不应该爱手铐, 实际上被转动一块重的石头在我们的身体, 只我首先运载它, 现在实际上作为举在之外我们去所有。是疲乏, 愿休息, 实际上无法去除重的布料封皮的幸福, 在包裹安装不是紧贴对, 但是生活钢在心脏标记。爱不是人居住完全, 人也许实际...

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一些爱, 不需要等待?I 不知道 在一个放浪人和一名轻佻妇女之间愿有爱, 生活轨道演奏把戏安排我们遇见其他, 或许是我们是注定的原因。 amativeness 不应该爱手铐, 实际上被转动一块重的石头在我们的身体, 只我首先运载它, 现在实际上作为举在之外我们去所有。是疲乏, 愿休息, 实际上无法去除重的布料封皮的幸福, 在包裹安装不是紧贴对, 但是生活钢在心脏标记。爱不是人居住完全, 人也许实际上居住为爱, 既使活不放松, 一定不了解实际上爱允许是自由的心脏。爱, 偏僻许诺为我们的诺言, 选择没有我们。 恐惧光, 实际上渴望温暖; 期待爱, 不能实际上接近。在黑暗拉扯二冰冷手相互对准备, 那个可怜的温度殷勤, 在心脏沈默地告诉自己, 这是在生活哀痛, 不叫爱。踪影黑色出来, 而且不能有明亮路回去, 我不会宁可滴下, 多余的讲话的复制品: "Do 您害怕那您由yourself?" " 我害怕能l 来back!" 错过在冷淡的时间倍增传播, 是更多, 我们只复制简单的问候。"Where 是您at?" "Outside." "What 是busy?" "Is 认为you!" "Has matter?" "Is 所有right." 心脏, 变化在短的问候上温暖地听起来... 最后一天, 您混淆要求我: 我们"Actually 计算什么, 甜心? 太不耐烦! 配偶? 太funny!" 疑义不是重的, 或说在心脏讲话: "We 是任何一定是不重要的, 我只知道I 爱you!" 您微笑着或哭泣? 我非常爱您chillily 美妙地微笑, 被满足您愉快的泪花。最近您是I 最远的爱, 您说喜欢允许在心脏永恒, 但不必须等。不敢狂放的希望几乎一起经常伴随, 因此在非常接近的天际; 相互不需要承诺任何, 我们能只是爱的convict 。

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Believe it or not, there is a kind of love that you do not need to wait.
But you may wonder if there is any kind of real love between those of the dissolute and frivolous, who have to run into eac...

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Believe it or not, there is a kind of love that you do not need to wait.
But you may wonder if there is any kind of real love between those of the dissolute and frivolous, who have to run into each other either by money and tricks, or who have been framed by God and destiny.
The lust should not be shackles, which bind men and women tightly. Nor the desires shold turn into a heavy stone upon men and women. First you are bond and depressed, then you have to rise up, and to walk free.
不满你说，看你的英文有如同读汉文的感觉。这里，我仅试译楼主的第一段的前半部分。如满意，我有空时再试译余下的部份。

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我只会锐化.

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不要想好中文在翻译英语。而是用英语写英语。这是principle

well done

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