10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,1.That document was urgent,so you should do it first.2.When I was trying to aviod the turch,I forgot the other side was a bus station.3.Eventhough the machine is very accurate,it still has some mistake.4.Eventh

10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,1.That document was urgent,so you should do it first.2.When I was trying to aviod the turch,I forgot the other side was a bus station.3.Eventhough the machine is very accurate,it still has some mistake.4.Eventh
10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,
1.That document was urgent,so you should do it first.
2.When I was trying to aviod the turch,I forgot the other side was a bus station.
3.Eventhough the machine is very accurate,it still has some mistake.
4.Eventhough the sailor has life jacket,the water just extreme cold.
5.We saw the ambassador was walking in the street,but we didn’t see his bodyguard.
6.Last night,I was dreaming that I had a very odd experience in hollywood.
7.You should be care for about the liquid which was put in the grass because it is vitriol.
8.Omar asked a trap from steve,but steve didn’t agree to that.
9.An efficiency worker will make money more than the worker who didn’t do their work very well.
10.We should calculate the result immediately because we don’t have enough time.

10个句子,帮我检查下语法错误,1.That document was urgent,so you should do it first.2.When I was trying to aviod the turch,I forgot the other side was a bus station.3.Eventhough the machine is very accurate,it still has some mistake.4.Eventh
1.That document is urgent,so you should do it first.
或者 That document was urgent,so you should have done it first.
得看你想要表达的是什么意思什么时态了.
2.When I was trying to avoid the turch,I forgot that (别漏了that) the other side was a bus station.
(貌似没有turch这词,你要表达的是什么?)
3.Even though (分开写,是两个单词) the machine is very accurate,it still makes some mistakes.(mistakes用复数,另外用make mistakes)
4.Even though the sailor has a life jacket,the water is just extremely cold.
(life jacket前边加"a",另外extreme改成extremely)
5.We saw that the ambassador was walking on the street,but we didn't see his body guard.
(the ambassador跟在that后面,in the street改成on the street)
6.Last night,I dreamed of having a very odd experience in hollywood.(不用过去进行时,因为没有明确的时间点.用dream of,意思是梦到了什么)
7.You should be careful about the liquid which was put in the glass because it is vitriol.
(care for是照顾的意思,改成careful.be careful是小心的意思.另外我想你要表达的是glass,不是grass吧?)
8.Omar asked for a trap from Steve,but Steve didn't agree to that.(用asked for,意思是向某人要什么东西)
9.An efficient worker will make more money than one who doesn't do their work very well.
efficiency ->efficient,形容词形式
make money more than...改成 make more money than...
the worker可以直接用one来代替
10.最后一句没错.

1 so you should have done it first.
2 make some mistakes
4 the water is just extreme cold.
5 We saw the ambassador walking in the street.
7 You should have been care of the liquid........

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1 so you should have done it first.
2 make some mistakes
4 the water is just extreme cold.
5 We saw the ambassador walking in the street.
7 You should have been care of the liquid.....
8 steve didn't agree with that.
9 An efficient worker makes more money than the worker who doesn't do his work very well.
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虽然分数很少。但就算给你帮忙了！
1. That document was urgent, so you should do it first.
修改：this document is urgent, so you should do it first.
这里不要用was，因为你在强调一个事实。
2. When I was trying to aviod the t...

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虽然分数很少。但就算给你帮忙了！
1. That document was urgent, so you should do it first.
修改：this document is urgent, so you should do it first.
这里不要用was，因为你在强调一个事实。
2. When I was trying to aviod the turch, I forgot the other side was a bus station.
3. Eventhough the machine is very accurate, it still has some mistake.
修改：Although the machine is very accurate, it still makes some mistakes.
是make mistakes不是has mistakes。还有some后边加负数！
4. Eventhough the sailor has life jacket, the water just extreme cold.
虽然... = although，不是eventhough。
修改： although the sailor has life jacket, the water is extrmem cold.
5. We saw the ambassador was walking in the street, but we didn’t see his bodyguard.
6. Last night, I was dreaming that I had a very odd experience in hollywood.
修改：Last night, I was dreaming that I was very experienced in hollywood
7. You should be care for about the liquid which was put in the grass because it is vitriol.
修改：把care for 改成care of
8. Omar asked a trap from steve, but steve didn’t agree to that.
9. An efficiency worker will make money more than the worker who didn’t do their work very well.
修改：efficiency是名词，你要形容一个有效率，或者工作效率高的工作人员要用形容词 = efficient。还有后边的didn't改成does not，因为前后语句时态要相同。
修改：An efficient work will make more money than the worker who does not do his work very well.
10. We should calculate the result immediately because we don’t have enough time.

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