挑一下英语语法错误,请指教.Ladies and gentlemen.I'm * *.I was quite an outgoing girl in high school.have a special pursuit of beautiful ,just like all the high school girls did.But actually,my hair is still very messy.Because,I dont like c

挑一下英语语法错误,请指教.Ladies and gentlemen.I'm * *.I was quite an outgoing girl in high school.have a special pursuit of beautiful ,just like all the high school girls did.But actually,my hair is still very messy.Because,I dont like c
挑一下英语语法错误,请指教.
Ladies and gentlemen.I'm * *.I was quite an outgoing girl in high school.have a special pursuit of beautiful ,just like all the high school girls did.But actually,my hair is still very messy.Because,I dont like complex things ,afraid of taking my time for those things which are not very troublesome
汉文是：女士们,先生们.我叫××.我是一个性格相当外向的高中女生.如同所有的高中女生一样,对于美丽有着异于寻常的追求.但事实上,我的头发还是常常的十分凌乱.因为,我相当的怕麻烦,怕分出一点点的心思对于那些不是很棘手的事情.

挑一下英语语法错误,请指教.Ladies and gentlemen.I'm * *.I was quite an outgoing girl in high school.have a special pursuit of beautiful ,just like all the high school girls did.But actually,my hair is still very messy.Because,I dont like c
注意：我把错误直接更正I was quite an outgoing girl 应给为i am 不是陈述过去,不能用过去式. high school应该为a high school.一个学校前面必须有冠词.而且不强调这个学校,只说我在一个高中.所以就用a, 泛指一个高中,没有特指这个学校. have a special pursuit of beautiful 应该为i have a pursuit of beauty,all the high school girls 应该为all the other high school girls 和其他所有高中的女孩子一样 But actually, my hair is still very messy.更改为well actually my hair is often very messy.afraid 前加and 变成and afraid of .which are not very troublesome 改成 that is not very troublesome.those 不可数名词不能用are.

waste 改成 wasting 其它顶楼上

Ladies and gentlemen. I'm * *. I am quite an outgoing girl in high school.I have a special pursuit of beauty ,just like all the high school girls do. But actually, my hair is still very messy. Because, I dont like complex things , afraid of taking my time for those things which are not very troublesome

Ladies and gentlemen. I'm * *. I was quite an outgoing high school girl student.i have a special pursuit of beauty ,just like all the other high school girls do. But actually, my hair is still very ...

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Ladies and gentlemen. I'm * *. I was quite an outgoing high school girl student.i have a special pursuit of beauty ,just like all the other high school girls do. But actually, my hair is still very messy. Because, I don't like too complex things , and i am also afraid of waste my time in those things which are not very troublesome.

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