求大神找出这篇祝贺信回复信的错误,•DearVigeous•Ireceivedyouletterjustnow.Thankyoufor your congratulations.I will never forget your kindness.•Iwish to press my profound appreciation for congratulating us win the firstp

求大神找出这篇祝贺信回复信的错误,•DearVigeous•Ireceivedyouletterjustnow.Thankyoufor your congratulations.I will never forget your kindness.•Iwish to press my profound appreciation for congratulating us win the firstp
求大神找出这篇祝贺信回复信的错误,
•DearVigeous
•Ireceivedyouletterjustnow.Thankyoufor your congratulations.I will never forget your kindness.
•Iwish to press my profound appreciation for congratulating us win the firstprize.Our class is very excited until now.I will keep working hard andstruggling until I speaking beautiful English.I will to go to the Englishcorner activities once aweek.andpractice oral English with foreign Englishteacher.Wehope that our class towin the first prize again next you.
•Thankyou again for your congratulation.
•Yours•
•ZhangMing

求大神找出这篇祝贺信回复信的错误,•DearVigeous•Ireceivedyouletterjustnow.Thankyoufor your congratulations.I will never forget your kindness.•Iwish to press my profound appreciation for congratulating us win the firstp
看着好乱,有几处我不知道是不是你书写的问题,没列出来.Our class is very excited until now——until now与前面搭配不对.until I speaking beautiful English ——speakingI will to go to ——不能will接toWehope that our class towin the first prize again next you.——hope that句型,没有hope to.

Dear Vigeous，

Thank you for your warm words.
I wish to express my profound appreciation for your constant support, which has helped us win the first prize. Our class is very excited abou...

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Dear Vigeous，

Thank you for your warm words.
I wish to express my profound appreciation for your constant support, which has helped us win the first prize. Our class is very excited about this momentum, too. We will keep working hard for an even better English. I plan to go to the English corner once a week to practice my oral English with foreign teachers. I hope our class will win another first prize again!
Thank you again for your congratulations.
Yours
Zhang Ming

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