求高人帮我修改英语作文谢谢P.S：After I have a argue with my best friend,I was so upset that I don't want to do anything,and I start to eat,until I was full.Then I began to think over that who was right and think if I were her what would
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求高人帮我修改英语作文谢谢P.S：After I have a argue with my best friend,I was so upset that I don't want to do anything,and I start to eat,until I was full.Then I began to think over that who was right and think if I were her what would
求高人帮我修改英语作文谢谢P.S：
After I have a argue with my best friend,I was so upset that I don't want to do anything,and I start to eat,until I was full.Then I began to think over that who was right and think if I were her what would I say.When I realized that I was wrong I tried to say sorry to her.
直接打上去的,可能会有很多错误
求高人帮我修改英语作文谢谢P.S：After I have a argue with my best friend,I was so upset that I don't want to do anything,and I start to eat,until I was full.Then I began to think over that who was right and think if I were her what would
首先你的单词功底不够牢固.“争执”在你句中应该是名词,所以是“I have an argument.”
注意原因开头的名词前冠词为an
不要过多使用逗号!英语不是中文,有逗号的一般都在非限定性从句中,或者有非谓语动词的时候,初中还没有到这种水平.
所以我开始吃那里重新起一句So I start to eat until I was full.
我开始思考那里把后半段改为“...think over whether she was right.”比较好.
还有再后面注意正常语序啊.应该是“If I were her what I would say“会用虚拟语气很好,但也暴露你的语法漏洞,多加强哟!
最后一句太过琐碎,感觉就是中文口语翻过来的
I tried to say sorry to her when I realized that I was wrong.
只改变一下顺序就会自然过了!~
有一定基础功底,但不扎实,加强单词与小语法,加油吧!
After arguing with my best friend, I was so upset that I wanted to do nothing. I kept on eating until I felt full. Later I began to think if I am right. If I were her, what I would have said. In the end I decided to say sorry to her.
I argued with my best friend, I was so upset that I don t want to do anything, and I start to eat, until I was full.Then I began to think over that who was right and think if I were her what would I say. I have realized my mistake, I tried had to apologize to her, but I always fail, also don't know why.