寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.我今晚就要发言了,Good afternoon,everybody,I’m very glad to have this opportunity to make a speech to you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.I love my class very much!Because I think

寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.我今晚就要发言了,Good afternoon,everybody,I’m very glad to have this opportunity to make a speech to you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.I love my class very much!Because I think
寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.
我今晚就要发言了,
Good afternoon,everybody,
I’m very glad to have this opportunity to make a speech to you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.
I love my class very much!Because I think we’re a struggling team.In study,although we’re not the best class,we’re the hardest one.As far as I’m concerned,our classmates all like studying very much.On the other hand,we’re a unitive team.For example,military training.We won the second.As is known to all,military training needs the perfect cooperation.And we do it.
This is our class.It’s a harmonious class.
Okay,these are all I want to say.Thank you.

寻找英语高手帮我找一下我的英语演讲稿错误.我今晚就要发言了,Good afternoon,everybody,I’m very glad to have this opportunity to make a speech to you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.I love my class very much!Because I think
Good afternoon,everybody：
It is really a great honor to have this opportunity to make a speech for you.My topic is OUR CLASS,OUR FAMILY.
I love my class very much!On one hand,I think we’re a struggling team,although we’re not the best class in study,we’re the hardest one.As far as I’m concerned,our classmates all like studying very much.On the other hand,we’re a unitive team.Take the military training for example,It is well known that military training needs good cooperation.And we did it,so we won the second prize.
This is our class,a harmonious class.
Okay,that's all for my speech.Thanks for listening.
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第一句这样更好些：It's my honor to make a speech here.
for example应改为such as second后面加place perfect前的the去掉 do 改成did
thank you后面可以加上for listening.
供你参考，好好表现。 As is known to all是对的。

we’re the hardest one.(hardest working one)
We won the second(we won second prize/we came second/we were second)
As is known to all,(as known to all)
And we do it(we did it)