英文文法(逻辑)检查!Rccently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho allot his property.I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he have four wives.He have seventeen member of his

英文文法(逻辑)检查!Rccently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho allot his property.I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he have four wives.He have seventeen member of his
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Rccently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho allot his property.I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he have four wives.He have seventeen member of his family.That is the reason why their family will use the different ways to conflict to the other's member.Up to now ,Mr Ho is not announce the finally plan to the his distribution.Whatever the result is good or bad,there is no deny that it will bring a certain extent influence in our soceity.

英文文法(逻辑)检查!Rccently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho allot his property.I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he have four wives.He have seventeen member of his
He have seventeen member of his family.------He has 17 family members OR There are 17 members of his family
That is the reason why their family will use the different ways to conflict to the other's member------use the different way to conflict with the other ones
Mr Ho is not announce the finally plan to the his distribution.-------Mr. Ho did not announce the finnally plan of his distribution
Whatever the result is good or bad------WHatever the result/decision will be
there is no deny that it will bring a certain extent influence in our soceity.-------There is no doubt that it will bring a certain extent influence to our society. (society 拼错了)
另外,很多次是不是查电子词典查的啊,例如：celebrity,建议最好能用比较常用的词.

Recently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho alloted his property. I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he has four wives.He hav...

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Recently,the hot news in Macau is that casino magnate Stanley Ho alloted his property. I think this news is interesting because Stanley Ho is a celebrity who can announce that he has four wives.He have seventeen member in his family, and this is the reason their family uses different ways to conflict with each other. Until now, Mr Ho has not announced the final plan to his property distribution. Whatever the result, there is no denying that it will bring a certain impact to our society.

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热点新闻,在澳门赌场大亨,何鸿燊分给了他的财产。我想这个消息很有趣,因为何鸿燊是一个名人谁能宣布他有4个妻子。他有17他的家庭成员当中。,这就是为什么他们的家庭将使用不同的方法来的冲突对方的成员。到目前为止,胡先生是没有正式宣布最后的计划其发行。不管结果是好是坏,有不可否认,它将带着一定的程度上影响着我们...

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热点新闻,在澳门赌场大亨,何鸿燊分给了他的财产。我想这个消息很有趣,因为何鸿燊是一个名人谁能宣布他有4个妻子。他有17他的家庭成员当中。,这就是为什么他们的家庭将使用不同的方法来的冲突对方的成员。到目前为止,胡先生是没有正式宣布最后的计划其发行。不管结果是好是坏,有不可否认,它将带着一定的程度上影响着我们

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第一个词应是Recently,
第二处是That is the reason why their family will use the different ways to conflict to the other's member.中用use different ways会更好；其中的conflict用法有问题，这句改成That is the reason why their fam...

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第一个词应是Recently,
第二处是That is the reason why their family will use the different ways to conflict to the other's member.中用use different ways会更好；其中的conflict用法有问题，这句改成That is the reason why their family in conflict with others in many ways. 就没有了conflict用法问题
第三处是finally的使用，finally是副词，不能修饰名词，这样the final plan会更好

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