6小时作文改错,要速度呀（上部）.Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script,The Glass Menagerie.After reading this,I start to know the complication steps in a stage play.In fact,writing a play is not easy for writers.However,in The Glass

6小时作文改错,要速度呀（上部）.Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script,The Glass Menagerie.After reading this,I start to know the complication steps in a stage play.In fact,writing a play is not easy for writers.However,in The Glass
6小时作文改错,要速度呀（上部）.
Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script,The Glass Menagerie.After reading this,I start to know the complication steps in a stage play.In fact,writing a play is not easy for writers.However,in The Glass Menagerie,Tennessee Williams successfully describes very detail for the play.At the end of The Glass Menagerie,Amanda says to Tom,“You live in a dream; you manufacture illusions (1131).” In fact,all those three characters in the play are living in their dream.Today I will discuss about these three characters in The Glass Menagerie.
In Amanda’s opinion,she wants to pursue better life.However,because she married with a man and her husband already left to other place.She has not opportunities to pursue her up-level life.Now she is old and not attractive to men any more.Therefore,she hopes her daughter can attract a good and rich person to marry.When she talks to Laura,she just wants her daughter Laura to meet a lot of people for her future life.Then she can have an upper level life.On the other hand,she wants her son can always stay at home because she worried if Tom would leave home like his father.Therefore,she gives a lot of pressure on Tom.In Tom’s mind,she controls Tom’s life and she always tells Tom what should do.She doesn’t allow Tom to express his feeling in the family.Her words,such as “You are going to listen (1097)”,”You are no condition (1097)”,shout at Tom.Because she wants Tom to support their family,she doesn’t let Tom do things without earning money.

6小时作文改错,要速度呀（上部）.Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script,The Glass Menagerie.After reading this,I start to know the complication steps in a stage play.In fact,writing a play is not easy for writers.However,in The Glass
Today,I read the script of Tennessee Williams,The Glass Menagerie(如果是文章什么的做好事加“”）.After reading this,I start to know the complication steps in a stage play.In fact,writing a play is not easy for writers.However,in The Glass Menagerie,Tennessee Williams（之后再提作家的时候可以只用姓） successfully describes the play in detail.At the end of The Glass Menagerie（too repetitive,可以用the script 代替）,Amanda says to Tom,“You live in a dream; you manufacture illusions (1131).” In fact,all those three characters（你只说了两个） in the play are living in their dreams,and today I will discuss about them.
In Amanda’s opinion,she wants to pursue better life.However,because she was married to a man which had already left to another place,(这句子不通,句子不完整.改了可是不知道这是不是本意she does not have the opportunities to pursue her upper-level life.Now she is old and not attractive to men any more.Therefore,she hopes her daughter can marry a good and rich man.When she talks to her daughter,Laura,she wants her to meet many high class people for her future so then she can have an upper level life.On the other hand,she wants her son to always stay at home because she worried Tom would leave home like his father.Thus,she pressures Tom a lot.In Tom’s mind,her mother is the one who controls his life and tells him what to do.Amanda doesn’t allow Tom to express his feeling in the family.She shouts at Tom using words such as “You are going to listen (1097)”,”You are no condition (1097)”.Since she wants Tom to support their family,she doesn’t let Tom do things without earning money.
只供参考~还有一些问题.可是应为有些句子不明白所以没改

Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script, The Glass Menagerie. After reading this, I start to know the complication steps in a stage play. In fact, writing a play is not easy for writers. However, in ...

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Today I read Tennessee Williams’s script, The Glass Menagerie. After reading this, I start to know the complication steps in a stage play. In fact, writing a play is not easy for writers. However, in The Glass Menagerie, Tennessee Williams successfully describes very detail for the play. At the end of The Glass Menagerie, Amanda says to Tom, “You live in a dream; you manufacture illusions (1131).” In fact, all those three characters in the play are living in their dream. Today I will discuss about these three characters in The Glass Menagerie.
In Amanda’s opinion, she wants to pursue better life. However, because she married with a man and her husband already left for other place. She has no opportunities to pursue her up-level life. Now she is old and not attractive to men any more. Therefore, she hopes her daughter can attract a good and rich person to marry [marry with]. When she talks to Laura, she just wants her daughter Laura to meet a lot of people in her future life. Then she can have an upper level life. On the other hand, she wants her son to stay at home because she worried if Tom leave home like his father. Therefore, she gives a lot of pressure to Tom. In Tom’s mind, she controls Tom’s life and she always tells Tom what should do. She doesn’t allow Tom to express his feeling in the family. Her words, such as “You are going to listen (1097)”,”You are no condition (1097)”, shout at Tom. Because she wants Tom to support their family, she doesn’t let Tom do things without earning money.

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第三行very detail ———every detail
第五行in their dream——in their dreams
第二段第一行married with a man ——married a man
第二段第二行her husband already left to other place——her husband has already left fo...

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第三行very detail ———every detail
第五行in their dream——in their dreams
第二段第一行married with a man ——married a man
第二段第二行her husband already left to other place——her husband has already left for another place
第二段第二行She has not opportunities ——She has no opportunities
第二段第六行she wants her son can always stay ——she wants her son to always stay
what should do——what he should do
第二段第六行she worried if Tom ——she worries if Tom
第二段第七行she gives a lot of pressure on Tom——she gives Tom a lot of pressure

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