初三的英语作文 ·I plan to help chean the city park and bist the sick children in the hospital,because I want to give a good environment to all people and give more love to the sick children ,I know they are very loney.I will clean the rubbish

初三的英语作文 ·I plan to help chean the city park and bist the sick children in the hospital,because I want to give a good environment to all people and give more love to the sick children ,I know they are very loney.I will clean the rubbish
初三的英语作文 ·
I plan to help chean the city park and bist the sick children in the hospital,because I want to give a good environment to all people and give more love to the sick children ,I know they are very loney.I will clean the rubbish on the city park,to give the people a good environment.I will buy some books and fuits for the sick children who is in the hospital.
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初三的英语作文 ·I plan to help chean the city park and bist the sick children in the hospital,because I want to give a good environment to all people and give more love to the sick children ,I know they are very loney.I will clean the rubbish
I plan to help chean the city park and bist (bist-你想用哪个单词呢) the sick children in the hospital,because I want to give a good environment to all people and give more love to the sick children,as (加一个as表示因为,和前面的句子起到联系的作用,英语中的两个句子如果用逗号隔开的话,中间需要有起到联系的词,比如and,because,表示并列句,因果句等等) I know they are very loney（lonely,孤独的）.I will clean the rubbish on （应该用in,在某个地点用in,不用on） the city park,（此处逗号应该去掉,因为动词不定式中间不应断句） to give the （去掉the,表示全体人,而不是特指某一些人）people a good environment.I will buy some books and fuits （fruits,水果）for the sick children who is （将is改为are,复数）in the hospital.

give a good environment to all people 改为because I want to contribute to the environment
,I know they are very loney改为",who I think are very lonely"
to give 前去掉“，”然后加上and the environment will...

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give a good environment to all people 改为because I want to contribute to the environment
,I know they are very loney改为",who I think are very lonely"
to give 前去掉“，”然后加上and the environment will take a new look 不要用成中国式英语，平常要多读英语文章
children who is in 中is 改为are

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