朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.August 9th Thursday SunnyI want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and live that city.What are they doing?Happy or unhappy?8月19号 星期三 晴我想回家,我想我的妈妈

朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.August 9th Thursday SunnyI want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and live that city.What are they doing?Happy or unhappy?8月19号 星期三 晴我想回家,我想我的妈妈
朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.
August 9th Thursday Sunny
I want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and live that city.What are they doing?Happy or unhappy?
8月19号 星期三 晴
我想回家,我想我的妈妈、我的朋友和我所居住的城市.他们在干什么呢?快乐不快乐.
如果有请告诉我错在那，为什么？

朋友们帮忙看看这篇简单的英语日记有没有错误.August 9th Thursday SunnyI want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and live that city.What are they doing?Happy or unhappy?8月19号 星期三 晴我想回家,我想我的妈妈
19th August Wednesday Fine
I want to go home. I miss my mother, my friends and the city I lived. What are they doing? Happy or unhappy?

August 9th ,Thursday ,Sunny
live that city=====the city I lived
所居住的城市应为the city I lived，不可,I miss live that city.一个句子中不能有两个动词

I miss my mother、my friend and live that city有问题"I miss my mother ,my friend and the city which I live."

I want to go to home 不对 去掉第二个to
I miss my mother、my friend and live that city 改成 I miss my mother、my friends ande the city I lived in.
Happy or unhappy?
改成 Are they happy or unhappy.
日期19th August Wednesday Fine

August 9th ---August 19th
I want to go to home--I want to go home
live that city--the city that I lived

19th August, Wednesday, Sunny
I want to go home. I miss my Mum, my friends and the city I lived. What are they doing now? Happy or not?

I want to go to home,I miss my mother、my friend and the city in which I was brought up. What are they doing?Happy or not?

1.go home 是短语,中间不能加介词to.因为home在此是副词.除此之外还有go there/here ...
2.I miss my mum,my fridend and the city (where I live)你的句子中主语是我.谓语是想念,我的母亲,朋友是想念的宾语. and 是一个连词,连接两个相同的成分.如:run and jump,singing and danc...

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1.go home 是短语,中间不能加介词to.因为home在此是副词.除此之外还有go there/here ...
2.I miss my mum,my fridend and the city (where I live)你的句子中主语是我.谓语是想念,我的母亲,朋友是想念的宾语. and 是一个连词,连接两个相同的成分.如:run and jump,singing and dancing ,in and out...
所以其后不能接动词live,而应该接名词城市.哪个城市呢.我居住的做定语从句,放在所修饰词的后边.
定语从句的先行词是物(城市)时,那么引导词应该用that 或which引导,which I live in,in 不可省略,因为city是它的宾语, in which也可以写成where.

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and live that 改为the city where I lived .
就这个错误。