Jeff ran quickly,seized Flora's arm.这句话错在哪?

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Jeff ran quickly,seized Flora's arm.这句话错在哪?
Jeff ran quickly,seized Flora's arm.
这句话错在哪?

Jeff ran quickly,seized Flora's arm.这句话错在哪?
1.此句没有任何连词,却出现了两个并列谓语动词ran和seized.
2.改法有两种:
1)Jeff ran quickly,seizing Flora's arm.
还是简单句,把seized改为现在分词seizing(因为seize是句子主语Jeff主动发出的动作),以做伴随状语.
2)Jeff ran quickly,and seized Flora's arm.
采用and这个连词把此句变为一个有并列谓语ran和seized的句子.