帮我找出这些句子中的语病 单句改错1.his name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy2.as many as 62500people died as result of the earthquake3.she felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her sel

帮我找出这些句子中的语病 单句改错1.his name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy2.as many as 62500people died as result of the earthquake3.she felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her sel
帮我找出这些句子中的语病 单句改错
1.his name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy
2.as many as 62500people died as result of the earthquake
3.she felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her self-control
4.there's no doubt whether one day he will succeed
5.i made her to pomise not to tell anyone,and she said she would keep my secret
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帮我找出这些句子中的语病 单句改错1.his name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy2.as many as 62500people died as result of the earthquake3.she felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her sel
1.His name was come up whenever it came to the matter of nuclear energy.
当涉及和能量问题是他的名字总是被提及.
was come up 改为 came up
这里无需被动,come up表示提及,“主动用,被动翻”.
如：The project came up in their conversation.
这项工程在他们在谈话中被提到.
2.As many as 62500 people died as result of the earthquake.
地震的结果导致62500个人丧生了.
as result of 改为 as a result of
这是固定词组.
3.She felt like to yell at him,but she was determined not to lose her self-control.
她情不自禁地想对他咆哮,但是他决定不要失去自控.
feel like to yell 改为 feel like yelling
feel like doing表示情不自禁想要做某事,也是固定搭配.
4.There's no doubt whether one day he will succeed.
毫无疑问他有一天他会成功的.
whether 改为 that
there is no doubt/wonder+that+从句,这是表示毫无疑问的固定句型.
5.I made her to pomise not to tell anyone,and she said she would keep my secret.
我让她保证不会告诉任何人,并且她说她会保密的.
to promise 改为 promise
make sb do sth.

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4 应该是whether 改成that doubt否定从句中用that
1 当谈到核能时，就得谈到他的名字
2 62500死于地震
3 他想为他呐喊，但他下定决心不失掉自我控制力
4 毫无疑问有一天他将成功
5 我让他保证不告诉任何人，他说他会保守我的秘密
加点分吧，O(∩_∩)O谢谢...

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楼上答错了一个
4 应该是whether 改成that doubt否定从句中用that
1 当谈到核能时，就得谈到他的名字
2 62500死于地震
3 他想为他呐喊，但他下定决心不失掉自我控制力
4 毫无疑问有一天他将成功
5 我让他保证不告诉任何人，他说他会保守我的秘密
加点分吧，O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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1. was come up 改为 came up
2. as result 改为 as a result
3. like to yell 改为 like yelling
4. whether 改为 whatever
5。to promise 改为 promise