英语翻译在接近中午的时候,我收到了一家公司的邮件,他是我们的合作伙伴.他在邮件中介绍了他们的产品和服务等信息.我与给其他负责人打电话大概讨论了一下这个事情,然后我给我们的合

英语翻译在接近中午的时候,我收到了一家公司的邮件,他是我们的合作伙伴.他在邮件中介绍了他们的产品和服务等信息.我与给其他负责人打电话大概讨论了一下这个事情,然后我给我们的合
英语翻译
在接近中午的时候,我收到了一家公司的邮件,他是我们的合作伙伴.他在邮件中介绍了他们的产品和服务等信息.我与给其他负责人打电话大概讨论了一下这个事情,然后我给我们的合作伙伴回复了一封邮件,邮件内容主要是列举一些采购物品的清单.我花费了将近一个小时打电话和回复这封邮件!
翻译如下：
Near noon,I received an e-mail from a company,it is our partner.He described their products and services and other information in this e-mail.I called other responsible person to discuss this matter a bit,and then I reply to our partners an e-mail,message content is listed some major procurement of goods list.It spent 1 hour on the call and reply this e-mail.
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英语翻译在接近中午的时候,我收到了一家公司的邮件,他是我们的合作伙伴.他在邮件中介绍了他们的产品和服务等信息.我与给其他负责人打电话大概讨论了一下这个事情,然后我给我们的合
有几处不太对,帮你改了一下.
“Around noon,I received an e-mail from a company,it is our partner.In the e-mail,he described their products and services and some relevant information.I called the other person responsible to discuss this matter for a bit,and them I replyed our partner's e-mail,the content is basically some lists on the procurement of goods.It took me around an hour to make calls and reply this e-mail.”

接近中午最好说：before noon
Before noon, i received an e-mail from a company, a cooperator of mine.

I received an e-mail from a company in the afternoon. It is our partner. He introduced their products , services and other information in this e-mail. I asked our colleagues to discuss this matter and then I replied him with an e-mail to list some major products .I spent 1 hour to make calls and reply this e-mail.

改为Near noon, I received an e-mail from a company, it is our partner. Its products and services and other information are described in this e-mail. I called other responsible person to discuss this ...

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改为Near noon, I received an e-mail from a company, it is our partner. Its products and services and other information are described in this e-mail. I called other responsible person to discuss this matter a bit, and then I replied our partners an e-mail, including some major shopping list.I spent about one hour on calling and replying this e-mail.

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