英文好的来给看下,这句话这么说行不行?怎么改比较好Enclosed is the application supporting materials of ABC,which has been submitted to the online application system to be considered for admission of Materials Science ,M.S.of DEF U

英文好的来给看下,这句话这么说行不行?怎么改比较好Enclosed is the application supporting materials of ABC,which has been submitted to the online application system to be considered for admission of Materials Science ,M.S.of DEF U
英文好的来给看下,这句话这么说行不行?怎么改比较好
Enclosed is the application supporting materials of ABC,which has been submitted to the online application system to be considered for admission of Materials Science ,M.S.of DEF University.

英文好的来给看下,这句话这么说行不行?怎么改比较好Enclosed is the application supporting materials of ABC,which has been submitted to the online application system to be considered for admission of Materials Science ,M.S.of DEF U
您是不是想说：
随附的是ABC的申请证明材料,这些材料已经通过在线申请系统提交,用于DEF大学材料科学系的申请批准.
我个人觉得to be considered for admission of Materials Science ,M.S.of DEF University有点罗嗦,其实可以去掉前面的application和后面的to be considered,改成：
Enclosed is the supporting materials of ABC,which has been submitted to the online application system for the admission of Materials Science of DEF University.
如果翻译的不对,后面的话算我没说.

Enclosed不是形容词吗，怎么能做主语呢

哥 你把汉语给我我给你翻译吧大致的意思是：包裹内是ABC同学的申请材料，这些材料已经通过在线申请系统提交，ABC同学想得到DEF大学材料科学研究生院的录取。 尽量一句话完成，意思表达完整。谢谢what enclosed is the application materials of student ABC, which has been passed by the online applica...

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哥 你把汉语给我我给你翻译吧

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Enclosed 改成Attachment吧

Enclosed are the ABC's supporting materials, which have been submitted to the online application system for the admission of Materials Science , M.S. of DEF University.

首先主语是ABC的申请补充材料，主句和从句...

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Enclosed are the ABC's supporting materials, which have been submitted to the online application system for the admission of Materials Science , M.S. of DEF University.

首先主语是ABC的申请补充材料，主句和从句都用复数，第一个application 和后面的be considered 冗余了。

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Enclosed please find application supporting materials of ABC,which have been submitted to the online application system for admission of Materials Science , M.S. of DEF University.

根据我的理解，正确的写法应该是：
Enclosed are supporting documents ABC in my application submitted in the online application system for your consideration for admission to Materials Science , M.S. of DEF Universi...

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根据我的理解，正确的写法应该是：
Enclosed are supporting documents ABC in my application submitted in the online application system for your consideration for admission to Materials Science , M.S. of DEF University.
所附是我在“在线申请系统”中提交的申请待批进入...大学的申请文件中A、B、C项的支持性文件。

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