帮忙看下改错题十处错误When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taug

帮忙看下改错题十处错误When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taug
帮忙看下改错题十处错误
When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taught me much.She asked us to write fifteen -page about a movie.When I went to her with my paper,she encouraged her to use my cteativity and researched deeper into the movie.With her encouragement,I found more many information.She took times to dicuss my paper with me several times.In the end,I wrote a paper that I was proud on
When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taught me much.She asked us to write fifteen -page paper about a movie.When I went to her with my paper,she encouraged her to use my cteativity and researched deeper into the movie.With her encouragement,I found more many information.She took times to dicuss my paper with me several times.In the end,I wrote a paper that I was proud on

帮忙看下改错题十处错误When I was in high school,I had a great amount of nice teachers.Instead,none of them was very influential in my life .my best teacher doesn't come along until I was in college.Not only was she intetesting,and she taug
1.amount --number 2.in-- on 3.doesn't ---didn't 4.and ---but 5.fifteen--page 后加papers
6.her 改为 me　　7．researched－－research　8.去掉many　9times－－time　10．on　－－of

1.amount-->number
2.nice-->beautiful
3.instead-->however

proud of...
researched 去掉ed
amount --number
best teacher doesn't （did not) come along
and (but also)
Not only was she ( not only she was)
,she encouraged her (me)
more many (much more)
with me（有点多余）
fifteen -page 后边少宾语吧，paper
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