英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation
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英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation
英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!
hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation which is a kind of fruit?let me tell you ,that is guava,Today,I have come to a new environment ,tlthough not familar with the environment ,but fortunately,there and Ispend a year student so I don'tfeel strange.I choose to major is English,though my English not very good .but I will use my persistence and determination to conquer all this .students!let us strive fo life!这是电脑翻译的 我怕会有语法错误 到时候就丑死了!希望各位帮我各忙 使语句通顺 我读的没感情 不知道有没有哪个网站可以教我读这一段的 明天就要去学校了 到里面给我加几句也可以
英语好的进来~帮我看看我的自我介绍!hello!everybody,my name is shiliu ,I come from hunan yueyang ,hear the name you will find it very interesting.because there is a kind of frui,s name and my name is similar ,you guess the pronuciation
不懂.为什麽英语不好还可以MAJOR IN ENG?
你这个就是典型的CHINGLISH啊.还有不要相信机译,害死你的……
-一般说I'M FROM XXX,如果你身处异乡可以说I CAME FROM XXX,如果在家乡说XXX IS MY HOMETOWN比较亲切.英语习惯地址顺序跟中国相反,所以中文说法湖南岳阳,英文就该说YUEYANG, HUNAN PROVINCE.
-还有不知道你要给中国人还是外国人演讲,如果对著中国人还好,对著外国人的话你那段" hear the name ... guava" 没有意思,因为他们不知道石榴中文怎麼说.而且你这段也处理的不好,CHINGLISH.
-接来下这一段“today ... dont feel strange" 看不懂,不知道你想说什麽.
-”I CHOOSE TO MAJOR IS ENG..." 两个动词了,你可以说“I CHOSE ENG AS MY MAJOR"
-"THOUGH MY ENG..." 读起来感觉怪怪的,不知道是不是正确,不过可以说”THOUGH IM NOT REALLY GOOD AT IT"
-别THOUGH完了又BUT,是错的.去掉BUT把后面的话接在“GOOD AT IT,” 后面还顺畅些.
这个……连想帮你改也不知道该如何下手,问题不少,可行不多.只能祝你好运了