请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London
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请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London
请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?
(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London.If you live at Proudfoot in London; you will find a park near here.There is a wooden bridge across the river where has many pairs of ducks are swimming.All in all,London is a great place,and everything in London welcomes you.
请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London
不修改就好了OK
终于，每个观点在伦敦美丽。有超过200个公园在伦敦。在冬天，白雪，天然林，不同种类的山，明确的河是够作出一张图片给伦敦。if你大阪厚生年金会馆普劳德富特在伦敦;你会发现