作文修改It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015.The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the ear
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作文修改It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015.The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the ear
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It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015.The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the earth once they are immigrated to the Mars.What’s more,it is greatly important for them to try to keep a good relationship with （1）other members.Experts strongly warned that the living conditions on the Mars are very hard,for not only the extremely cold climate(2) would they meet with,but also loneliness and fear.On the contrary ,the volunteers insist that they have got tired of the life on the earth,so greatly (3)being eager to experience the unknown ,mysterious life on the Mars; meanwhile,if the would(4) be succeeded,they would get the honor to be heroes of human beings.
（1）other是不是应该加-s,others
(2)would they meet,为什么用would?为什么不用原型will
(3)be为什么加-ing,不应该是 greatly be eager
（4）不是would succeeded would be succeeded 将被成功?
作文修改It is reported that thirty volunteers who are at least 18 years old will be chosen from all the globe and sent to the Mars by the year of 2015.The volunteers must make a full preparation that there is almost no chance to return to the ear
1 other 不用加s 因为后边跟了名词 others 不跟名词,直接表示其他人
2 would 表示一个可能性,will 表示必然发生的事情,根据意思这都是估计的
3 ing 是一个so 连接的因果伴随状语,动名词直接做伴随状语,so表因果关系
4 这里应该是would succeede,用wuould be suceeded,suceeded是过去分词当形容词用