英语 句子改错 Error correction 1 There is quite a bit of rain in your part of the country,isn't it?2 The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all part of our cultural heritage.3 It w

英语 句子改错 Error correction 1 There is quite a bit of rain in your part of the country,isn't it?2 The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all part of our cultural heritage.3 It w
英语 句子改错 Error correction
1 There is quite a bit of rain in your part of the country,isn't it?
2 The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all part of our cultural heritage.
3 It was in a second-hand store where he bought the book he likes best
4 The man practices what he preaches because he doesn't smoke,drinkl or does anything to excess
5 American women have come a long way on the road toward a role for women which are dignified and responsible as the one assigned to men
6 Emergency relief ,including medicine,clothing,and food stuffs,were sent to the earthquake zone immediately following news of the disaster.
7 So is the length of the bridge that the shape of the earth had to be taken into account by its designer.
8 Among the forest of skyscrapers stand the 108-stay-tall Empire Building which was constructed at the cost of hundreds of millions of dollars
9 I'll lend this dictionary to you as far as you promise to take good care of it and return it to me on time
10 Even if in its ruined state we can see what a great work of art the last supper must have been ,for the perfection of its design remains.
11 In what literary form she wrote,she had but one theme,that is ,liberty,either national and political freedom or intellectual freedom
12 When a person goes to California a real effort should be made to see camels,even the visit is a short one
13 He is always polite not only to his supervisors and colleagues but to anyone else whom he thinks deserves consideration
14 The computer,it is a 20th century invention,has created starling technological changes in the way we organize and produce information
15 When President Kennedy spoke in Berlin on behalf the American people,he was received with a show of enormous enthusiasm

英语 句子改错 Error correction 1 There is quite a bit of rain in your part of the country,isn't it?2 The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all part of our cultural heritage.3 It w
1.There is quite a bit of rain in your part of the country,isn't it?
——There is quite a bit of rain…,isn't (there)?(存在句的反意疑问句应该用 isn't there)
2.The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all part of our cultural heritage.
——The way we react to other people,the educational training we received and the knowledge we display are all (parts) of our … (并列主语,应该用 parts)
3.It was in a second-hand store where he bought the book he likes best
——It was in a second-hand store where he bought the book he (liked) best.(定语从句 he likes best与主句的时态不一致,出现时空错位,要把 likes 改为 liked)
4 The man practices what he preaches because he doesn't smoke,drink or does anything to excess
——… he doesn't smoke,drink or (do) anything to excess (doesn't smoke,drink后面的or does是三个用在否定句的并列动词原形之一,改为do)
5.American women have come a long way on the road toward a role for women which are dignified and responsible as the one assigned to men
——… a long way … which (is) dignified and responsible … (which指代先行词a long way,定语从句中的谓语动词应该改为is)
6.Emergency relief,including medicine,clothing,and food stuffs,were sent to the earthquake zone immediately following news of the disaster.
——Emergency (relieves)… were sent to…（紧急救援包括后面的三项,应该改为复数relieves 是were sent保持一致）
7.So is the length of the bridge that the shape of the earth had to be taken into account by its designer.
——So is the length…that the shape of the earth (has) to… 或者So (was) the length … that the shape of the earth had to …（So is the length和the earth had to be taken时态不一致,要么都用过去时,要么都用现在时）
8.Among the forest of skyscrapers stand the 108-stay-tall Empire Building which was constructed at the cost of hundreds of millions of dollars
——Among the forest of skyscrapers (stands) the 108-stay-tall Empire Building …(这是倒装句,主语the 108-stay-tall Empire Building是单数,谓语动词要改为单数第三人称形式stands).
9.I'll lend this dictionary to you as far as you promise to take good care of it and return it to me on time
——I'll lend this dictionary to you as (long) as …(as far as 表示“直到”,应该改为表示“只要”的 as long as)
10.Even if in its ruined state we can see what a great work of art the last supper must have been,for the perfection of its design remains.
——… we can see (that) a great work of art the (Last Supper) must have been…(有两处错误：一是陈述性宾语从句应该用 that 引导,而不是 what；二是同位语 the Last Supper 是专有名词,应该大写.)
11.In what literary form she wrote,she had but one theme,that is ,liberty,either national and political freedom or intellectual freedom
——In (whatever) literary form she wrote,…(本意是“不管她写的是什么样的文学形式中”,whatever literary form she wrote = any literary form that she wrote.)
12.When a person goes to California a real effort should be made to see camels,even the visit is a short one
——a real effort should be made (for him) to see camels,(句中的主语是effort,不能作不定式 to see 的逻辑主语,应该添加指代a person的介词短语 for him)
13.He is always polite not only to his supervisors and colleagues but to anyone else whom he thinks deserves consideration
——… whom he thinks (to deserve) consideration (认为某人该做某事应该是 think sb.to do sth.这里的宾语 whom 提前,后面要用不定式to deserve 意思是 “认为他们[任何人]都值得体谅”)
14.The computer,it is a 20th century invention,has created startling technological changes in the way we organize and produce information
——The computer,(which) is a 20th century invention,(非限制性定语从句要用关系代词which)
15.When President Kennedy spoke in Berlin on behalf the American people,he was received with a show of enormous enthusiasm
——When President Kennedy spoke in Berlin on behalf (of) …the American people（on behalf of 指“以某人的名义”或者“代表某人”,介词 of 不可少）

()里是改好的--你觉得楼上搞出responsibled的靠谱？那就没办法，我的就删掉把不好意思哈，可能我只看了几道吧，我看到几个，比如说13题，but 加个also 貌似没有道理的啊，没有好像也对的，所以说不靠谱了，实在是不好意思啦，我求题心切么！~原谅原谅~！要是您有空，可以解释下改错的原因，我会追加的。谢谢！我已经删掉了，不过评价下楼上的答案好了 1 isn't it-----isn't ...

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()里是改好的--你觉得楼上搞出responsibled的靠谱？那就没办法，我的就删掉把

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1 isn't it-----isn't there
2 received----receive
3 where---that
4 你写错了好多词。。。- -b不过应该是笔误。。。what---that
5 responsible----responsibled
6 following----followed
7 had----has
好多。...

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1 isn't it-----isn't there
2 received----receive
3 where---that
4 你写错了好多词。。。- -b不过应该是笔误。。。what---that
5 responsible----responsibled
6 following----followed
7 had----has
好多。。。懒得打了。。。

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1.isn't it--isn't there
2.received--receive
3.where--that
4.does--do
5.are--is which修饰的是role
6.不确定怎么改 反正relief和were单复数不一致
7.that--as一定要改 had改不改has不知道
8.stand--stands
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1.isn't it--isn't there
2.received--receive
3.where--that
4.does--do
5.are--is which修饰的是role
6.不确定怎么改 反正relief和were单复数不一致
7.that--as一定要改 had改不改has不知道
8.stand--stands
9.far--long
10.if去掉
11.what--whatever
12.a real effort中的a去掉
13.whom--who he thinks是插入语 who修饰anyone else
14.it is去掉
15.on behalf--on behalf of

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