下面是我求职的英文自我介绍,请大神帮我看看是否有语法错误,It is really myhonor to be here for this interview,I hope i can make a good performancetoday.I'm confident that I can succeed.First let me introduce myself.My nameis L

下面是我求职的英文自我介绍,请大神帮我看看是否有语法错误,It is really myhonor to be here for this interview,I hope i can make a good performancetoday.I'm confident that I can succeed.First let me introduce myself.My nameis L
下面是我求职的英文自我介绍,请大神帮我看看是否有语法错误,
It is really myhonor to be here for this interview,I hope i can make a good performancetoday.I'm confident that I can succeed.First let me introduce myself.My nameis LiLiang,I am 30 years old.I come from SUZHOU,A small city of ANHUI Province.I graduated from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008,My major is Human Resource Management ,Overthe past five years,I work in sales in three different companies,so I have veryrich experience in sales,I am also able to work under great pressure.I know that XXX is a well known company,so I hope to havethe opportunity to become a member of your staff.Ok,that’s all,Thank you .

下面是我求职的英文自我介绍,请大神帮我看看是否有语法错误,It is really myhonor to be here for this interview,I hope i can make a good performancetoday.I'm confident that I can succeed.First let me introduce myself.My nameis L
It is（不用加really 太罗嗦） my honor to be here for this interview.(两句话之间不能用,号)And I believe i would make a good performance.My name is LiLiang,30 years old.and I come from SUZHOU,in ANHUI Province.I studyin the major of Human Resource Management ,from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008.as for my working experience Overthe past five years,I exercise in sales in three different companies which help me experience in sales,I could also work perfectly although undering great pressure.I know that XXX is a well known company where I hope to havethe opportunity to become a member .Ok,that’s all,Thank you .

去掉：I hope i can make a good performancetoday. I'm confident that I can succeed. First
听上去，太不自信了。
口语化一些，如果你只需要英语的自我介绍，不妨读几遍，里面加一些口语词：去掉一些主语，比如过多的I。不必过于注意语法，毕竟如果不进行英语面试过程的话，实际上企业对于英语没有那么高的要求，也就是...

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去掉：I hope i can make a good performancetoday. I'm confident that I can succeed. First
听上去，太不自信了。
口语化一些，如果你只需要英语的自我介绍，不妨读几遍，里面加一些口语词：去掉一些主语，比如过多的I。不必过于注意语法，毕竟如果不进行英语面试过程的话，实际上企业对于英语没有那么高的要求，也就是走个过程罢了。放松一点。

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It is（不用加really 太罗嗦） my honor to be here for this interview.(两句话之间不能用，号)And I believe i would make a good performance. My name is LiLiang, 30 years old. and I come from SUZHOU,in ANHUI Province.I stu...

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It is（不用加really 太罗嗦） my honor to be here for this interview.(两句话之间不能用，号)And I believe i would make a good performance. My name is LiLiang, 30 years old. and I come from SUZHOU,in ANHUI Province.I studyin the major of Human Resource Management ,from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008。as for my working experience Overthe past five years, I exercise in sales in three different companies which help me experience in sales, I could also work perfectly although undering great pressure. I know that XXX is a well known company where I hope to havethe opportunity to become a member . Ok, that’s all, Thank you .

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