谁可以帮我看看有没有语法错误或者表达错误,怎样改进Chinese new yearIn Chinese,the new year is regarded as the most important traditional holiday. About Spring Festival many people have many special customs. Of course that is the
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谁可以帮我看看有没有语法错误或者表达错误,怎样改进Chinese new yearIn Chinese,the new year is regarded as the most important traditional holiday. About Spring Festival many people have many special customs. Of course that is the
谁可以帮我看看有没有语法错误或者表达错误,怎样改进
Chinese new year
In Chinese,the new year is regarded as the most important traditional holiday. About Spring Festival many people have many special customs. Of course that is the first day of the spring season. A year's plan stars with spring.So in that day people can pay a new year call them friend or relative. Regardless of they at home or abroad,they all can offer best wishes to they love people. In the festival,people call can greting with a unique gesture.In China,everyone all can use them special ways to spend a happy and prosperous new year.
谁可以帮我看看有没有语法错误或者表达错误,怎样改进Chinese new yearIn Chinese,the new year is regarded as the most important traditional holiday. About Spring Festival many people have many special customs. Of course that is the
语法错误：第一行Chinese改成China,holiday改成festival,About改成In；
第二行,season去掉,
第三行,stars改成starts,with改成from,in去掉,call后面加on,them改成their,friend和relative加复数,
第四行,at home前面加are,all放到can后面,they love放到people后面,
第五行,people call can greting 什么的,这句话不知道想表达什么意思.后面一句all放到can后面,them改成their.
至于语言表达的问题,好多话都很别扭,就不一一列举了.