求修改一篇英文演说词A Bosom Friend Is UnfotgettableDear my friends,I want to ask you a question.Do you have a bosom friend?If your answer is a ‘Yes’,you are such a lucky guy.What does ‘A BOSOM FRIEND’ mean?In my opinion,when he sees

求修改一篇英文演说词A Bosom Friend Is UnfotgettableDear my friends,I want to ask you a question.Do you have a bosom friend?If your answer is a ‘Yes’,you are such a lucky guy.What does ‘A BOSOM FRIEND’ mean?In my opinion,when he sees
求修改一篇英文演说词
A Bosom Friend Is Unfotgettable
Dear my friends,
I want to ask you a question.Do you have a bosom friend?If your answer is a ‘Yes’,you are such a lucky guy.
What does ‘A BOSOM FRIEND’ mean?In my opinion,when he sees something you may like very much,he will buy for you without hesitation,even you don’t have to thank him.When you are afraid of the thunders and the lightning,he will accompany you.When you break up with your lover,he will be the first one who comforts you...
So treasure him —— who will be so good to you even without any report back on what has been done except your parents?How hard it is to find a friend who you don’t have to say ‘Thanks’ to him!You should know,no matter how time flies,this friendship will never be diluent.He will be forever unforgettable.
不知道有没有什么语法或者词语搭配用错的,最好可以修改到正常语速读完差不多是一分半钟,

求修改一篇英文演说词A Bosom Friend Is UnfotgettableDear my friends,I want to ask you a question.Do you have a bosom friend?If your answer is a ‘Yes’,you are such a lucky guy.What does ‘A BOSOM FRIEND’ mean?In my opinion,when he sees
从标题数起.
第六行里”he will buy fo you……"（少了宾语）改成：“he will buy it for you……”（it 为形式宾语）
第六行里“hesitation"前加个”any"情感程度高一点.
第六行里的”even you don't ……“（即使你不需要……）改成：you even don't……（你甚至不需要……）
第七行里“he will accompany you.”(accompany无感情色彩,意思多为随同,伴随)改成：“he will keep you company." (keep sb.company为陪伴在某人身边)
第七行里的”he will be the……“（他将会是那个……）改成：”he must be the……“（一定是他……）
最后第二行里的”this friendship……“改成：”the friendship……“
最后第二行里的”He will be forever unforgettable ."改成：“He will be unforgettable forever."(forever 是副词,加在形容词后)
Good luck!

第三句Yes前没有a，第二段第二行buy it for you ,don't thank him,第二段最后一句who改为to,report 改为reward，how hard it is，it is去掉，thanks to 后面的him 去掉