初中改错题一行字有一个错误,小弟确实改不了,有些也不能确定改对没有?谢谢各位大侠I bought a clock in a shop on last Sunday afternoonThis morning,however,I found that it was not workedSo I went back the shop with it.Th

初中改错题一行字有一个错误,小弟确实改不了,有些也不能确定改对没有?谢谢各位大侠I bought a clock in a shop on last Sunday afternoonThis morning,however,I found that it was not workedSo I went back the shop with it.Th
初中改错题
一行字有一个错误,小弟确实改不了,有些也不能确定改对没有?谢谢各位大侠
I bought a clock in a shop on last Sunday afternoon
This morning,however,I found that it was not worked
So I went back the shop with it.This shop assistant
asked me whether I had not followed the instructions and
used it in the right way. I told him I knew how to use.
After he hears this, he tried it and also found that
there was anything wrong with the clock. Then I wanted
him to take it back and gave the money back to me
and he refused. He asked me to change it for another
one.Finally I have got a new clock it works well now.

初中改错题一行字有一个错误,小弟确实改不了,有些也不能确定改对没有?谢谢各位大侠I bought a clock in a shop on last Sunday afternoonThis morning,however,I found that it was not workedSo I went back the shop with it.Th
删去on
worked->working
back后加to
删去not
use后加it
hears->heard
anything->something
gave->give
and->but
删去have

去掉on（last+时间等前不加介词）
去掉was（闹钟是停止工作，不是被停止）
去掉back（我是去商店，不是回）
。。。

in改为at
worked改为working
back后面加to
去掉not
use后面加it
hears改为heard
anything改为something
去掉take it back中的back
and改为but
clock后面加and

I bought a clock in a shop last Sunday afternoon
This morning,however,I found that it didn't work
So I went back to the shop with it.This shop assistant
asked me whether I had followed...

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I bought a clock in a shop last Sunday afternoon
This morning,however,I found that it didn't work
So I went back to the shop with it.This shop assistant
asked me whether I had followed the instructions and
used it in the right way. I told him I knew how to used it.
After he heard this, he tried it and also found that
there was something wrong with the clock. Then I wanted
him to have it back and gave the money back to me
but he refused. He asked me to change it for another
one.Finally I got a new clock it works well now.
改完了自己对照改吧

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一行 去掉on
二行 worked改成working
三行 back后加to
四行 去掉not
五行 最后的use后加it
六行 hears改成heard
七行 anything改成something
八行 gave 改成 give
九行 and 改成but
十行 去掉have

第一行没有on的，last Sunday本来就是一个表示时间的短语
第二行，把was改成does,work是个动词，一句句子不可能有两个动词，而does是助动词
第三行，把back改成to，back是副词而不是介词
第四行，把not去掉，whether已经有是否的意思了，要加也要在最后加or not
第五行，在him和I之间加个that，宾语从句要加that

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第一行没有on的，last Sunday本来就是一个表示时间的短语
第二行，把was改成does,work是个动词，一句句子不可能有两个动词，而does是助动词
第三行，把back改成to，back是副词而不是介词
第四行，把not去掉，whether已经有是否的意思了，要加也要在最后加or not
第五行，在him和I之间加个that，宾语从句要加that
第六行，把hears改成heard，是过去时啊
第七行，把anything改成something。anything是用在否定和疑问句里的。
第八行，把back或者to去掉，因为这两个词都有还给的意思，重复了。
第九行，把change改成replace。change是改变的意思，这里意思不对
第十行，在clock和it之间加个and因为是两句句子当中要有连接词。

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I bought a clock in a shop (\) last Sunday afternoon on==> \
This morning,however,I found that it (did) not worked was==>did
So I went back () the shop with it.This shop assis...

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I bought a clock in a shop (\) last Sunday afternoon on==> \
This morning,however,I found that it (did) not worked was==>did
So I went back () the shop with it.This shop assistant \==>to
asked me whether I had (\) followed the instructions and not==>\
used it in the right way. I told him I knew how to use (it). \==> it
After he (heard) this, he tried it and also found that hears==>heard
there was(something)wrong with the clock.Then I wanted anything=>sth.
him to take it back and gave the money （\） to me back==>\
(but) he refused. He asked me to change it for another and==>but
one.Finally I (\) got a new clock it works well now. have==>\

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I bought a clock in a shop last Sunday afternoon
This morning,however,I found that it didn't work
So I went back to the shop with it.This shop assistant
asked me whether I had followed ...

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I bought a clock in a shop last Sunday afternoon
This morning,however,I found that it didn't work
So I went back to the shop with it.This shop assistant
asked me whether I had followed the instructions and
used it in the right way. I told him I knew how to used it.
After he heard this, he tried it and also found that
there was something wrong with the clock. Then I wanted
him to have it back and gave the money back to me
but he refused. He asked me to change it for another
one.Finally I got a new clock it works well now.

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