请求修改语法错误,翻译机不要Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future. First of all, because of the cultu

请求修改语法错误,翻译机不要Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future. First of all, because of the cultu
请求修改语法错误,翻译机不要
Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
First of all, because of the culture difference, immigrants need more time to adapt in the society of the United State.
Secondly, Some skilled new immigrant will help to make our country strong and prosperous.

请求修改语法错误,翻译机不要Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future. First of all, because of the cultu
1.Although 和but 不能连用!中国式英语的常见错误
2.but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
want和can两套谓语 错误,使用want sb to do句式可以
3.culture difference应该使用形容词 cultural
4.new immigrant 应该使用复数形式.

不懂、。。。

在同一个句子中，although 和but不能同时使用，两者中要删去其中一个。
adapt to是固定搭配，adapt不能与in搭配。

尽管罗宾逊和萨缪尔森对移民问题看法不同，但他们二人都想让移民能适应这个社会，并为国家的美好未来做出贡献。
首先，由于文化差异，移民需要更多时间去适应美国社会。
其次，一些技术熟练的新移民将使我们国家繁荣富强。
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尽管罗宾逊和萨缪尔森对移民问题看法不同，但他们二人都想让移民能适应这个社会，并为国家的美好未来做出贡献。
首先，由于文化差异，移民需要更多时间去适应美国社会。
其次，一些技术熟练的新移民将使我们国家繁荣富强。
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Although和but只能留一个 把can adapt to 改为to adapt to to adapt in the......改为: to adapt the society in United States
new immigrant 变为复数

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1、Cut either 'although' or 'but' out.
2、Change 'want' into 'expect'
3、Substitute 'in' after 'adapt' in the second sentence with 'to'
4、Add 's' to the immigrant in the last sentence
These paragraphs must be written by the asker!

第一句话的语法点是want 的搭配，want sb to do sth. 所以，应该改为：but both of them want the immigrants to adapt to the society and to give this country a better future. 第二句话的语法点是adapt 的搭配，adapt 后面应跟介词 to , 应是adapt to the society 而不是adapt in the society,

1.Although 和but 不能同时用。
2.but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
want改为expect or hope更合适。can改为to或去掉。
3.adapt to not adapt in
4. new immigrant 应该用复数。

英语与汉语语法是有区别的，汉语有：虽然...但是...的表达法，可是英语 Although......,but.........就错了，所以把but去掉就行了。

1.Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them ……
Although 和but 不能连用！去掉二者之一
2.but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and...

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1.Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them ……
Although 和but 不能连用！去掉二者之一
2.but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
want sb to do，故改can为to
3.First of all, because of the culture difference……
culture difference应该使用形容词 cultural
4. adapt in the society of the United State……
固定搭配“适应”应为adapt to，故改in 为to
5.Some skilled new immigrant will ……
some修饰可数名词复数，故new immigrant 应该使用复数形式。
6.Some skilled new immigrant will ……
其主语为Some skilled new immigrant，这应为一个主语从句，故改为That some skilling new immigrant ……

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want the immigrants can adapt to the society 改为want the immigrants to adapt to the society
the culture difference改为the different culture
Some skilled new immigrant 中的immigrant要加上s，因为是复数。

第一段but 去掉 CAN 改成 TO
第二段 IN 改成 to
第三段 immigrants

Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
First of all, becau...

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Although Robinson and Samuelson have different perspectives on immigrants,but both of them want the immigrants can adapt to the society and give this country a better future.
First of all, because of the differences of culture , immigrants need more time to adapt to the society of the United States.
Secondly, Some new skilled immigrant will help to make our country stronger and more prosperous

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第一段把but去了，把want换成hope，第二段把in换成to，第三段immigrant用复数