求牛人英语改错~求英语牛人帮忙把下面这段话改错一下~语法错误~The purpose of this article is to analyse and discuss the example through colour theories and applications.This example comes from the movie “The Departed”.(Ap

求牛人英语改错~求英语牛人帮忙把下面这段话改错一下~语法错误~The purpose of this article is to analyse and discuss the example through colour theories and applications.This example comes from the movie “The Departed”.(Ap
求牛人英语改错~求英语牛人帮忙把下面这段话改错一下~语法错误~
The purpose of this article is to analyse and discuss the example through colour theories and applications.This example comes from the movie “The Departed”.(Appendix 1) As why I choose this movie poster,there are several reasons as follow.Firstly,a poster is one of graphic design.Moreover,there are lots of theories and applications to show in this poster.In this article,the range of the colour will be identified and,in the second part,the poster will be deeply analysis and discussion based on the colour theory and functional.

求牛人英语改错~求英语牛人帮忙把下面这段话改错一下~语法错误~The purpose of this article is to analyse and discuss the example through colour theories and applications.This example comes from the movie “The Departed”.(Ap
The purpose of this article is to 中式说法
This article is designed to .
第一句：This article is designed to analyse and discuss an example (an instance也可,后面才知道你讲的是哪个例子,这里要泛指用不定冠词） using（through是通过,你想表达通过什么方法,用using或via） colour theories and applications.
As why I choose this movie poster,there are several reasons as follow.语法错（前有why后有reason,这两个词不一起使用在一个句子中的）
The reasons that I choose this movie poster are as follow
there are lots of theories and applications to show in this poster
在海报展现出很多理论,理论是被show出来的,用被动,或索性不用to show也行
In this article,the range of the colour will be identified and,in the second part,the poster will be deeply analysis and discussion based on the colour theory and functional.
想表达什么,混乱,语法错很多哦
要知道你的意思再改
另外,是不是没有完结,因为只有firstly,后面的secondly,thirdly呢?

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