麻烦谁给改下作文 Forrest gumpIn a normal afternoon,I saw a famous film what make me change myself.Its name is Forrest gump.The novel begining of the movie attract my heart.A piece of feather stop near his shose.He hold some chocolates and tal

麻烦谁给改下作文 Forrest gumpIn a normal afternoon,I saw a famous film what make me change myself.Its name is Forrest gump.The novel begining of the movie attract my heart.A piece of feather stop near his shose.He hold some chocolates and tal
麻烦谁给改下作文
Forrest gump
In a normal afternoon,I saw a famous film what make me change myself.Its name is Forrest gump.
The novel begining of the movie attract my heart.A piece of feather stop near his shose.He hold some chocolates and talk about something to a girl.His mother always said:” life was like a box of chocclaes.You never kown what you are going to get”.There are many beautiful sentences like this in the movie touch my heart the same.Frome this i can get much significance of life.
After the second war Forrest Gump was born a small country in south of UAS.It is very terrible .because he is a mentally handicapped boy.But he do not give up and his mother encouraged him and say :”you are no different than anybody else is .luckyly,the god didn’t abandon him,at the same time,he is a talent player.He can run fast.His heart and mind is pure like water.in the school bus,he meets a girl who is his true love.In the junior of school he went to a collage and got a new live frome here.last he became a rugby player ,a super star.Then ,he was receieved as an honoured guest at the White House.After university graduation,as a new soldier ,he join the vietnam war.
The war stop,as the emissary of bing-pang diplomacy,gump went to china attend table tennis match.His belif is :”a promise is a promise”.so he successed.but he didn’t like money.last he became a gardener and has a harmonious family.

麻烦谁给改下作文 Forrest gumpIn a normal afternoon,I saw a famous film what make me change myself.Its name is Forrest gump.The novel begining of the movie attract my heart.A piece of feather stop near his shose.He hold some chocolates and tal
In an ordinary afternoon,I watched a famouse movie which had changed me.It is 'Forrest Gump'.
3 attracted ,stopped
4.shoes,he was holding some cho...talking ...
5.will never know
6.touching my heart .不要the same
7.I also got to understand much essence of life from them.
8.second world war,USA,
9.he was a mentally...he did not
10.you are not different...
11.把所有关于阿甘的时态全部改成过去式,我就不一个个改了.
12.a girl who would be his true love
13.什么叫 in the junior of school?at last,
14.he was invited as a honoured guest ...
15.after graduation from university,
16.the war ended,
17.finally ,he became a gardener.

应该用过去时，把动词改为过去式。
I watched a famous film which made me change myself.
The novel at the begining of the movie attracted my heart.
:” life is like a box of chocclaes.用原形is.
in the movie ...

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应该用过去时，把动词改为过去式。
I watched a famous film which made me change myself.
The novel at the begining of the movie attracted my heart.
:” life is like a box of chocclaes.用原形is.
in the movie touch my heart the same movie 后加 which.
But he do not give up 改成 did。
encouraged him and say 用said 。
In the junior of 用after
gump went to china attend table tennis China 大写，其后加to.
but he didn’t like 用 现在时，don't。
总的来说，你的时态没有掌握好。

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