检查这段话中的错误Hi,everyone!It's a great honor to stand on this stage and perform for you.Although I can’t speak English well,I will do my best and not give up!Well,my name is Kylie ,(中文名),I was born on （时间）in （地点）,

检查这段话中的错误Hi,everyone!It's a great honor to stand on this stage and perform for you.Although I can’t speak English well,I will do my best and not give up!Well,my name is Kylie ,(中文名),I was born on （时间）in （地点）,
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Hi,everyone!It's a great honor to stand on this stage and perform for you.Although I can’t speak English well,I will do my best and not give up!Well,my name is Kylie ,(中文名),I was born on （时间）in （地点）,The gray hair on my parents' heads increases daily accompanying my growth .My parents are kind to me ,they pass knowledge to me and teach me to be useful to the world.In my mind,they are the best parents on the world therefore I have a happily family.
I like our school very much,because receiving knowledge is a kind of pleasure .I’m the monitor in our class,I have the strong sense of responsibility and the collective sense of honor .Our class is my second home,it is a warm and fragrant community.
I’m an active girl ,so I’m full of energy ,sometimes I play tennis with my mother ,that’s my favorite sports.And my favorite food is chocolate,because it can make you drown into its sweetness .In my spare time ,I usually read books in the library or play the piano .I think piano is the golden key to the Palace of Music.Play the piano is the art of organizing sounds,it’s a rhythmic poem that inspires,a harmonious tone that tranquilizes ,a melody of mystery and beauty.I really enjoy music.
I usually bring happiness and laughter everywhere I go.I have strong ambitions and I'm pretty confident.I’m going to win with my smiling.

检查这段话中的错误Hi,everyone!It's a great honor to stand on this stage and perform for you.Although I can’t speak English well,I will do my best and not give up!Well,my name is Kylie ,(中文名),I was born on （时间）in （地点）,
In my mind, they are the best parents on the world therefore I have a happily family.
应该是in the world
I have the strong sense of responsibility and the collective sense of honor
应该是a strong sense of responsibility and a collective sense of honor
a sense of是固定句型,比如说a sense of humor,幽默感
Our class is my second home, it is a warm and fragrant community.
应该是Our class is my second home and it is a warm and fragrant community.
逗号不能用来连接两个完整的句子
I’m an active girl ,so I’m full of energy , sometimes I play tennis with my mother ,that’s my favorite sports.
I’m an active girl ,so I’m full of energy. Sometimes I play tennis with my mother. Tennis is my favorite sport.
原因同上.网球只是一项运动,故sport用单数
Play the piano is the art of organizing sounds, it’s a rhythmic poem that inspires, a harmonious tone that tranquilizes ,a melody of mystery and beauty.
应该是Playing the piano is the art of organizing sounds. It's a rhythmic poem that inspires, a harmonious tone that tranquilizes, and a melody of mystery and beauty.
playing,动名词作主语;and必须有,表列举的最后一项
I have strong ambitions and I'm pretty confident. I’m going to win with my smiling.
应该是I have strong ambitions and I'm confident. pretty有还可以,还行的意思,反倒说明你不够自信
I’m going to win with my smiling.
应该是I’m going to win with my smile,用smiling不合语法