再帮我检查一下,VVIntroduce myself My name is Zhao Jing Ge.My English name is Candy.I have long black hair,and a pair of brown eyes.I like read books,draw pictures and dance.I like sports,every subject and too!Special in English.In my life,most

再帮我检查一下,VVIntroduce myself My name is Zhao Jing Ge.My English name is Candy.I have long black hair,and a pair of brown eyes.I like read books,draw pictures and dance.I like sports,every subject and too!Special in English.In my life,most
再帮我检查一下,VV
Introduce myself
My name is Zhao Jing Ge.My English name is Candy.I have long black hair,and a pair of brown eyes.I like read books,draw pictures and dance.I like sports,every subject and too!Special in English.In my life,most hard time in my primary school graduate holiday.I went to skating rink learn skating.But I learn it too bed.Because I am not good at equipoise.Fall,again and again .Up,again and again.Again,fall,again up.Coach drop on,don’t be afraid.Trauma,don’t be afraid.My skating skills were accumulated in tumbles and tears.Get cross this thing,I know:if I have backbone,no matter what,I can do good.Why I choice software and hardware was very good Xi Cheng English junior school read in this school for three year?Because I know Western city where the pursuit of a foreign language school is the overall development of students,while highlighting psychological quality education,modern information technology education,foreign language education in the three major characteristics.High standards and characteristics,the overall quality of education open to students by continually raising the quality.I believe that I will be trained very outstanding in your esteem school for the later three years.

再帮我检查一下,VVIntroduce myself My name is Zhao Jing Ge.My English name is Candy.I have long black hair,and a pair of brown eyes.I like read books,draw pictures and dance.I like sports,every subject and too!Special in English.In my life,most
like 后面的动词用ing形式
“I like sports,every subject and too!Special in English”
是不是想说 I like sports and also some other subjects,especilly English.
"In my life,most hard time in my primary school graduate holiday." -----the holiday when I graduated from primary school is the hard time.
I went to skating rink learn skating------I went to the skating rink to learn skating
But I learn it too bed------I learned not so well.
后面的我直接写了,你对比着看吧~
because my equipoise is not so good.I got down again and again and stood up time after time.From this expirence I understood that only if I keep going there is nothing I cannot do.why did I choose Xi Cheng English junior school Because I know it is the school which the way of its foreign language teaching is good for the development of students.
.during the 3 years .

a pair of brown eyes＝＝》brown eyes
dance＝》dancing（用名词）
every subject and too!什么意思？
, most hard time ＝》the most hard time
went to skating ＋》went skating

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厉害
同上．．．．．．

very good!

like 表示喜欢的话后面要接动名词或者名词

long black 互换位置 LIKE后面接动名词因此是RDADING
every subject and too!中的TOO改成ALSO 因为AND是连接两个名词的 用TOO 就应该在前面有个逗号隔开

I like reading books,drawing pictures and dancing.