能帮我改改下面的英文段落么 语法什么的 这是我的毕业演讲稿,Mom,dad,grandma,and grandpa,thank you for all your give and love.I wouldn’tforget what dad had told me the night before submitting high-school willingnesspapers tha

能帮我改改下面的英文段落么 语法什么的 这是我的毕业演讲稿,Mom,dad,grandma,and grandpa,thank you for all your give and love.I wouldn’tforget what dad had told me the night before submitting high-school willingnesspapers tha
能帮我改改下面的英文段落么 语法什么的 这是我的毕业演讲稿,
Mom,dad,grandma,and grandpa,thank you for all your give and love.I wouldn’tforget what dad had told me the night before submitting high-school willingnesspapers that “That is all we can help,you’re the master of rest of your life.”I know that you’ve paid for my willfulness.I know that you’ve sacrificed a lotfor my study.I know that when you blamed me for choosing studying abroad wasjust because you want me to stay.I’m always a little girl in your eyes.Nonetheless,please trust me and let me hold the ticket you gave it to me to seek the futureI want,so does my life.
No.13 High School furnished me of a life differsfrom senior high school.There are numerous of memories we obtained from theactivities we took as Class 14 a whole team in past three years,which are muchmore precious than the glories.Indeed,it do had the unhappy parts,but theseparts helped us to possess a high-school life with full of spunky and smile.Thank you for all the teachers no matter the Chinese or the Canadian teachers.You are patient enough so that I could have sufficient time to overcome myshyness.

能帮我改改下面的英文段落么 语法什么的 这是我的毕业演讲稿,Mom,dad,grandma,and grandpa,thank you for all your give and love.I wouldn’tforget what dad had told me the night before submitting high-school willingnesspapers tha
First and foremost, I‘d like to thank my mom, dad, grandma and grandpa for all the love and support that you have given me. I would never forget what dad told me the night before submitting my official choice of colleges. He said to me, “sweetheart(或者你名字), we’ve done all that we can do to help you and support you,from this point forward, you are on your own, you will be in charge of mastering the rest of your life”. Mom, dad, grandma and grandpa, I know that you guys have paid for my application to these colleges, that you have made many sacrifices for my schooling, and I appreciate everything that you have ever done for me! When you found out that I chose to study abroad, you were mad at me, I know that you weren’t really mad, and that you just wanted me to be close by so you can take care of me. I know that in your eyes, I will always be your little girl, and I know everything you do, you do it out of love for me, but I have reached an age that I could make mature decisions, and be responsible for those decisions made. So please try your best to just trust me, let me spread my wings and fly with all the skills you have taught me in my earlier years, to seek the future that I want.

No. 13 High School has given me a high school experience that surpassed my expectations by far. The past three years have been, and will remain, some of the most memorable years of my life. To all the classmates of
Class 14, thank you for your friendship. The fun that we had together doing those
school activities, the laughter and smiles we shared day to day, all those will
be my treasured memories. To all the teachers, both Chinese and Canadian, thank
you for all that you have done for us, bettering us, preparing us for the next
chapter of our lives! I’d especially like to thank you for being patient and kind. It was your patience and kindness that helped me
overcome my shyness.

（后面我总觉得没有完结,又稍稍加了一小段.你之前跟你爸说话的那段让我想起一首诗,我觉得适合做你文章的总结.你自己决定喽）
As we step out of high school, and turn our lives to the next chapter, I’d like to share a poem with my fellow schoolmates. It’s a poem by William Henley, called invictus:

Out of the night that covers me,
Black as the pit from pole to pole,
I thank whatever gods may be
For my unconquerable soul.
In the fell clutch of circumstance
I have not winced nor cried aloud.
Under the bludgeonings of chance
My head is bloody, but unbowed.
Beyond this place of wrath and tears
Looms but the Horror of the shade,
And yet the menace of the years
Finds and shall find me unafraid.
It matters not how strait the gate,
How charged with punishments the scroll,
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.

So let's begin our journeys as young adults, who will be responsible for all the life decisions made from this point forward. I would say good luck to everyone, but I can’t. We don’t need luck, for we are the masters of our fate, and we are the captains of our souls.