麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）Maxim Gorky,he lost father at five,spends his childhood in his grandfather's home.When he was 10,his mother died from illness.His grandfather made him to look for ajob.For 10 years he did all w

麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）Maxim Gorky,he lost father at five,spends his childhood in his grandfather's home.When he was 10,his mother died from illness.His grandfather made him to look for ajob.For 10 years he did all w
麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）
Maxim Gorky,he lost father at five,
spends his childhood in his grandfather's home.
When he was 10,his mother died from illness.
His grandfather made him to look for a
job.For 10 years he did all what he
could.He lived such life not because he
was interesting but because he wanted to
see the great land,which he lived,and the people
around he.The life in those years
let him deep understand the old Russian society
这是一篇英语的短文改错..有一排应该是对行..其他每一排都有错....因为我对自己的答案不是太确定...

麻烦大家帮我看下这篇短文改错（英语题）Maxim Gorky,he lost father at five,spends his childhood in his grandfather's home.When he was 10,his mother died from illness.His grandfather made him to look for ajob.For 10 years he did all w
1.he-->who
2.spends-->spent
3.from-->of 死于疾病
4.去掉to
5.what-->that
6.对
7.interesting-->interested
8.lived后面加on
9.he-->him
10.deep-->deeply
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1. he----who
2. spends----spent
3. from----of
4. 删除to
5. what--- that
6. such后加不定冠词a
7. interesting----interested
8. lived后加介词on
9. he----him
10. /

Maxim Gorky,(who 从后文看，此处应是定语) lost father at five,
（spent 保持前后时态一致） his childhood in his grandfather's home.
When he was 10,his mother died （of 固定搭配die of表示死于疾病，如cancer） illness.
His grand...

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Maxim Gorky,(who 从后文看，此处应是定语) lost father at five,
（spent 保持前后时态一致） his childhood in his grandfather's home.
When he was 10,his mother died （of 固定搭配die of表示死于疾病，如cancer） illness.
His grandfather made him （删掉to,固定搭配make sb. do sth.表示迫使某人做某事） look for a
job.For 10 years he did （all that或者只用what,没有all what） he
could.He lived such (加a)life not because （it 此处代指life）
was interesting but because he wanted to
see the great land,which he lived （加on,正常语序是live on the land）,and the people
around （him 用作宾语）.The life in those years
let him （deeply 副词修饰动词，deeply表示抽象意义上的深刻） understand the old Russian society

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1, he--who
2,spends--spent
3,from--of (
4. 去掉to ( make sb do sth)
5, 去掉all 或者 what--that (all that =what)
6,对
7,interesting--interested
8, which --where / lived 后面加in
9. he --him
10,deep --deeply