求改六级作文Should Parents Sent Their Kids to Art Classes1.\x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.2.\x05有人并不赞成……3.\x05我认为……When you walk on a road,when you watch TV,when you surf on the internet,there has a

求改六级作文Should Parents Sent Their Kids to Art Classes1.\x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.2.\x05有人并不赞成……3.\x05我认为……When you walk on a road,when you watch TV,when you surf on the internet,there has a
求改六级作文
Should Parents Sent Their Kids to Art Classes
1.\x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.
2.\x05有人并不赞成……
3.\x05我认为……
When you walk on a road,when you watch TV,when you surf on the internet,there has a lots of advertisements about art classes.Such as piano,painting,singing and so on.In this circumstance,parents sent their kids to attend the art classes.Because they wish their kids has wining at the beginning.
While some people do not think this action is good.For the reason is that,the kids id too young,they need time to play games with their friends.The most important is that,after school,kids is already tired,they need have a rest.
In my opining,parents should sent their kids to art classes,but do not too much.Because not only did the kids can learn knowledge,but also can don’t let them too tired.

求改六级作文Should Parents Sent Their Kids to Art Classes1.\x05有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班.2.\x05有人并不赞成……3.\x05我认为……When you walk on a road,when you watch TV,when you surf on the internet,there has a
When you walk on a road,watch TV or surf on the internet,there are lots of advertisements about art classes,Such as piano classes,painting study,singing and so on ,catch your eyes.Under this circumstance,parents send their kids to attend the art classes with the wish that their kids can win at the beginning.
However,some people do not think this action is good.For the reason that the kids is so young that they need time to play games with their friends instead of entering the art classes.What's more,after school,kids need some rest as they have already tired.
In my opinion,parents should sent their kids to art classes,but do not too much.Make kids learn more while taking their condintions into account ,so that they will not be too tired and have time to enjoy thier lives.

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