大家帮我看看我自己翻的短文有问题没A woman is singing.A girl says:‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask a man:‘Do you know who she is?’‘Yes.’ The man answer.‘She is my wife.’‘Oh,I beg your pardon.’The girl says,Of c

大家帮我看看我自己翻的短文有问题没A woman is singing.A girl says:‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask a man:‘Do you know who she is?’‘Yes.’ The man answer.‘She is my wife.’‘Oh,I beg your pardon.’The girl says,Of c
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A woman is singing.A girl says:‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask a man:‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answer.‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh,I beg your pardon.’The girl says,Of course her voice is not bad,but the song is very bad.I want to know who wrote this song
I did.The man answer.

大家帮我看看我自己翻的短文有问题没A woman is singing.A girl says:‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask a man:‘Do you know who she is?’‘Yes.’ The man answer.‘She is my wife.’‘Oh,I beg your pardon.’The girl says,Of c
1.对话需要在提示语前面；
2.整篇文章需要统一格式,如果没有看错的话,出现了一般现在式（ A girl says:）、现在进行式（A woman is singing.）,建议这种故事形文章改用过去式；
3.英文中是不提倡用“：”的,建议你把“：”去掉；
4.（I did.The man answer.)这句标点有问题吧.
____吉天成

告诉你一个最为严重的问题.英语中,在表达一个人的话时,要把话放在前面,说话的人放在后面,这与汉语中话语的表达刚好相反.不信,你在课本中看看,都是如此的.

A woman is singing. A girl says: ‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask(asks) a man: ‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answer(answers). ‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh, I beg your pardon. ’The girl...

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A woman is singing. A girl says: ‘What a terrible voice!’Then she ask(asks) a man: ‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answer(answers). ‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh, I beg your pardon. ’The girl says, Of course her voice is not bad, but the song is very bad. I want to know who wrote this song.
I did. The man answer(answers).
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A woman was singing. A girl said, ‘What a terrible voice!’ Then she asked a man, ‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answered. ‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh, I beg your pardon. ’The girl said, 'O...

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A woman was singing. A girl said, ‘What a terrible voice!’ Then she asked a man, ‘Do you know who she is?’
‘Yes.’ The man answered. ‘She is my wife.’
‘Oh, I beg your pardon. ’The girl said, 'Of course her voice is not bad, but the song is not good. I want to know who wrote this song.'
'I did.' The man answered.
本人觉得重述故事，应使用过去式，因为故事已经发生过了。

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