改短文,以下短文每一行都有错的,请指出并说出错误的原因1.School and college students in the United States often spent many 2.hours as volunteer in hospitals,orphannages or homes for the aged.3.They read books to the people in th

改短文,以下短文每一行都有错的,请指出并说出错误的原因1.School and college students in the United States often spent many 2.hours as volunteer in hospitals,orphannages or homes for the aged.3.They read books to the people in th
改短文,以下短文每一行都有错的,请指出并说出错误的原因
1.School and college students in the United States often spent many
2.hours as volunteer in hospitals,orphannages or homes for the aged.
3.They read books to the people in these places,and they just visit them
4.or listening to about their problems.Other young volunteers go and work in
5.the homes of people who are sick ot old.We paint,clean up,or repair
6.houses,do their shopping and mow their lawns.For boys who no lnger has
7.fathers there was an organization called Big Brothers.College students and
8.other men bring these boys to basketball games or on fishing trips and help them
9.to get to know things that boys usually learn in their fathers
10.Volunteers believe that some of the happiest people in the world
11.are those who help to bringging happiness to others.
以上每一行（以序号分）都有错误,请指出错在哪里?

改短文,以下短文每一行都有错的,请指出并说出错误的原因1.School and college students in the United States often spent many 2.hours as volunteer in hospitals,orphannages or homes for the aged.3.They read books to the people in th
1、spend 一般现在时用动词原形
2、volunteers 前面是students,复数形式要统一.orphanage里面多了个n.
3、just去掉,放进去意思有些别扭.（read to是对的,不需要改）
4、listen 一般现在时用动词原形 go to 因为go和work不共用介词in,所以go的介词不能省略
5、ot是or（这个应该是你打错了吧……）We改成They,全文都是用第三人称讲的.
6、do shopping for them 不能说do their shopping,longer里面少了个o,后面has改成have,因为boys是复数.
7、was改成is,全文时态统一.
8、play basketball 添加一个动词,games个人觉得不需要.go on fishing trips 缺少动词go.
9、in改成from,learn from fathers是从父亲那里学来的
10、实在觉得这句没错.要么把of the去掉.
11、bringing改成bring,因为是help to do.

1 spend
2volunteers
3是不是 to 改成 for
4去掉about
5.。。LZ字打错很多。。这个没看出啦
6has——have
7was ——is
8是不是哪个on 多余》？
9in——from
10不觉得错了
11.bring
抱歉 水平有限，，你也打错很多字。。实在不知道怎么改