(英语牛人进)英语改错.这是一篇简短的note .I am sorry to not invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.I know you've travled some famous interests,but there is also something interesting you've never experienced.If you

(英语牛人进)英语改错.这是一篇简短的note .I am sorry to not invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.I know you've travled some famous interests,but there is also something interesting you've never experienced.If you
(英语牛人进)英语改错.
这是一篇简短的note .
I am sorry to not invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.
I know you've travled some famous interests,but there is also something interesting you've never experienced.If you were free next vacation and would like to go traveling again,I will be your guide with pleasure!Something more beautiful and more delicious is waiting for you!
第二句的traveled 打错了。

(英语牛人进)英语改错.这是一篇简短的note .I am sorry to not invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.I know you've travled some famous interests,but there is also something interesting you've never experienced.If you
I am sorry (that) i haven't invited you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.
I know you've traveled some famous interestsing places,but there are something interesting you've never experienced.If you are free next vacation and want to travel again,It's my pleasure i can be your guide .Many beautiful and delicious things are waiting for you!个人拙见

很抱歉没有邀请你到我的家乡，为您忙碌的行程周游。我知道你已经走过一些有名的利益，但也有一些有趣的事情，你从来没有经历过的。如果你的下一个假期，并希望再次去旅行，我会成为你的指导与乐趣！更美丽，更好吃的东西等着你！

个人改法（暂时只涉及语法改正）如下！

I am sorry (to not改成not to：不定式的否定是在to前面加上not) invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.
I know you've traveled (加入to) some famous (interests改成places ...

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个人改法（暂时只涉及语法改正）如下！

I am sorry (to not改成not to：不定式的否定是在to前面加上not) invite you to travel around my hometown for your busy trip.
I know you've traveled (加入to) some famous (interests改成places of interest), but there is also something interesting you've never experienced. If you were free next vacation and would like to go traveling again, I (will改成would，对应从句的虚拟语气) be your guide with pleasure! Something more beautiful and more delicious is waiting for you!


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