一篇英语短文改错,十处错误After supper Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him.In our way to the cienma we saw the little firl sitting by the roadside cry.We bought her a cake to stop her crying.But when we asked where she had

一篇英语短文改错,十处错误After supper Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him.In our way to the cienma we saw the little firl sitting by the roadside cry.We bought her a cake to stop her crying.But when we asked where she had
一篇英语短文改错,十处错误
After supper Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him.In our way to the cienma we saw the little firl sitting by the roadside cry.We bought her a cake to stop her crying.But when we asked where she had lived,she said she did not know.So when we took her to the police station and asked the police to take care for her.After this we went to the cienma.But when we got there the movie was near at its end.We missed the movie,but we did a good deed.

一篇英语短文改错,十处错误After supper Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him.In our way to the cienma we saw the little firl sitting by the roadside cry.We bought her a cake to stop her crying.But when we asked where she had
asked me go and see_ asked me to go and to see
In our way _on our way
the little firl _a little girl
by the roadside cry_by the roadside crying
stop her crying_stop her from crying
she had lived_she lived
So when we took_So we took
take care for _ take care of
was near _was nearly

After supper Li Hua came and asked me to go and see a film with him. On our way to the cinema we saw a little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her crying. But when we ...

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After supper Li Hua came and asked me to go and see a film with him. On our way to the cinema we saw a little girl sitting by the roadside crying. We bought her a cake to stop her crying. But when we asked where she lived, she said she did not know. So we took her to the police station and asked the police to take care of her. After this we went to the cinema. But when we got there the movie was near its end. We missed the movie, but we did a good deed.

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1.to go
2.On our way
3.a little girl
4.and crying
5.stop her from crying
6.lived in
7.去掉So后面的when
8.take care of her
9.After that
10.去掉near或者at
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